Memory's Touch
Tetractys: Contest Entry56 total reviews
Comment from Zoe Yates
Ok, I suppose I should expound upon my review, I will fill up this space with some somewhat meaningless words until I fill up the word quota that is required, as I reviewed your poem once and was sent to a page that said short reviews aren't helpful. So now I will write what I meant for you to hear in the first place, and that is this, nothing more, nothing less:
Your poem should've one, it is so true. Oh and so well written.
Best wishes,Zoe
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Ok, I suppose I should expound upon my review, I will fill up this space with some somewhat meaningless words until I fill up the word quota that is required, as I reviewed your poem once and was sent to a page that said short reviews aren't helpful. So now I will write what I meant for you to hear in the first place, and that is this, nothing more, nothing less:
Your poem should've one, it is so true. Oh and so well written.
Best wishes,Zoe
Comment Written 17-Jan-2010
Comment from Trybuck
The color scheme you chose highlighted the artwork very well.
This looks like one I might want to try one day.
Congratulations on your win, Buck
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The color scheme you chose highlighted the artwork very well.
This looks like one I might want to try one day.
Congratulations on your win, Buck
Comment Written 16-Jan-2010
Comment from redglasses
I'm not familiar with this form of poetry. But after reading the notes, I pronounce, "You nailed it!" A wonderful thought you have set forth.
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I'm not familiar with this form of poetry. But after reading the notes, I pronounce, "You nailed it!" A wonderful thought you have set forth.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2009
Comment from Laidy
i thought this was a great poem and it had great visual and great messege to give out. i thought this was well written and a wonderful read.
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i thought this was a great poem and it had great visual and great messege to give out. i thought this was well written and a wonderful read.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
Comment from ArtGal
I like this poetry form and you wrote it so well! And so much truth in your last line, I really enjoyed! I might try this myself because I'm really getting into forms. Good luck in the contest!
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I like this poetry form and you wrote it so well! And so much truth in your last line, I really enjoyed! I might try this myself because I'm really getting into forms. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Bryana
So short and yet very profound.
It certainly made me think.
Excellent entry for the contest.
I wish you good luck
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So short and yet very profound.
It certainly made me think.
Excellent entry for the contest.
I wish you good luck
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from fictionwriter
What a beautiful sentiment. Memories are the place where those we love will always live. You've captured that thought so well in this poem. I throughly enjoyed it.
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What a beautiful sentiment. Memories are the place where those we love will always live. You've captured that thought so well in this poem. I throughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Oatmeal
Mrs. KT,
A cute little number. The arrangement is understandable and effective.
It is completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Mrs. KT,
A cute little number. The arrangement is understandable and effective.
It is completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Clouddancer
I love this little bit of wisdom in fifteen words and the exact syllabic count required. Excellent choice of art to go with this work that makes one think wahtever we have experienced is always a part of who we become.
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I love this little bit of wisdom in fifteen words and the exact syllabic count required. Excellent choice of art to go with this work that makes one think wahtever we have experienced is always a part of who we become.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
Comment from Patricia Crandall
This is a beaautiful, sad love poem and presents strong images in so few words. The artwork compliments the words. It draws on the emotions and is a competitive contest entry. Good luck. Patricia Crandall
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This is a beaautiful, sad love poem and presents strong images in so few words. The artwork compliments the words. It draws on the emotions and is a competitive contest entry. Good luck. Patricia Crandall
Comment Written 06-Nov-2009
