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Comment from babylonia
shelley,
tomorrow is a hope not a promise is soooo true. we all have to live this way or be doomed to pissing on today forever. nicely done. made me smile. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2009
shelley,
tomorrow is a hope not a promise is soooo true. we all have to live this way or be doomed to pissing on today forever. nicely done. made me smile. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 01-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2009
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thank you much :)
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you are welcome~
Comment from Sasha
This is an amazing and inspiring poem. I like it very much. I want to apologize. I have been terribly busy this past month working on my book, preparing for the Maztlan Art Walk, and going to school that I haven't had as much time to review as I would like. Hopefully in a few weeks things will slow down and I will be able to spend more time reviewing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
This is an amazing and inspiring poem. I like it very much. I want to apologize. I have been terribly busy this past month working on my book, preparing for the Maztlan Art Walk, and going to school that I haven't had as much time to review as I would like. Hopefully in a few weeks things will slow down and I will be able to spend more time reviewing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
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thank you so much :)
Comment from grassroots08
I think you did a great job of following the prompt on this one. Very nicely penned my friend. Thank you for sharing this unique piece. Cheers, Do
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
I think you did a great job of following the prompt on this one. Very nicely penned my friend. Thank you for sharing this unique piece. Cheers, Do
Comment Written 29-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from laren
A nice poem which tell us that present only counts.
We arribe to present from yesterday and tomorrow is only a hope. Very well written, with nice poetic figures!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
A nice poem which tell us that present only counts.
We arribe to present from yesterday and tomorrow is only a hope. Very well written, with nice poetic figures!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 29-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
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thankyathankya :)
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Thanks for sharing,
Laren