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Comment from babylonia
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shelley,
tomorrow is a hope not a promise is soooo true. we all have to live this way or be doomed to pissing on today forever. nicely done. made me smile. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2009


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2009
    thank you much :)
reply by babylonia on 01-Nov-2009
    you are welcome~
Comment from Sasha
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This is an amazing and inspiring poem. I like it very much. I want to apologize. I have been terribly busy this past month working on my book, preparing for the Maztlan Art Walk, and going to school that I haven't had as much time to review as I would like. Hopefully in a few weeks things will slow down and I will be able to spend more time reviewing.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2009


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
    thank you so much :)
Comment from grassroots08
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I think you did a great job of following the prompt on this one. Very nicely penned my friend. Thank you for sharing this unique piece. Cheers, Do

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2009


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
    thank you so much :-)
Comment from laren
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A nice poem which tell us that present only counts.
We arribe to present from yesterday and tomorrow is only a hope. Very well written, with nice poetic figures!

Congratulations!
Laren

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2009


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2009
    thankyathankya :)
reply by laren on 29-Oct-2009
    Thanks for sharing,
    Laren