The Sounds of Time
Our senses and our memories are inexorably linked51 total reviews
Comment from Kaladore
I think this is a touching memoir that gets its topic across well. We all have distintive memories that go with sounds, songs, taste, touch, etc. Thanks for sharing this trip down memory lane and then ending is touching.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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I think this is a touching memoir that gets its topic across well. We all have distintive memories that go with sounds, songs, taste, touch, etc. Thanks for sharing this trip down memory lane and then ending is touching.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
Comment from jwlee211
Great letter. Your daughter I am sure enjoyed these words. Great descriptions that pulls the reader into the selection. Great work
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Great letter. Your daughter I am sure enjoyed these words. Great descriptions that pulls the reader into the selection. Great work
Comment Written 19-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thanks for reading and for your kind and positive feedback!
Comment from animatqua
I thought this was beautifully done. I especially appreciated the way the sensual was incorporated into the work. All of us have a primary sense that stimulates our reactions. Touching on each receptor is a sure way to get meaning across to the widest audience. I think you did a good job in accomplishing this.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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I thought this was beautifully done. I especially appreciated the way the sensual was incorporated into the work. All of us have a primary sense that stimulates our reactions. Touching on each receptor is a sure way to get meaning across to the widest audience. I think you did a good job in accomplishing this.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thanks for reading and for your comment on senses.
Comment from hfriscia
This is a very interesting story...The flow is great, very easy read and tight...A nice work about family and kids, every word helped...
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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This is a very interesting story...The flow is great, very easy read and tight...A nice work about family and kids, every word helped...
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thank you for reading. An element I have to work on all the time in my writing is making the story tighter, so I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a wonderful story. You brought out such vivid pictures and emotions. Your description of the hammock and your daughter was priceless. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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What a wonderful story. You brought out such vivid pictures and emotions. Your description of the hammock and your daughter was priceless. Excellent job.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thank you for reading and for your kind and positive feedback.
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
I like smell myself. Lol! The story is written well. I found no errors here. Your narration flowed well. Good job.
Isaiah Ramesses
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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I like smell myself. Lol! The story is written well. I found no errors here. Your narration flowed well. Good job.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thanks Isaiah - I'm glad that you read the story and I appreciate your kind feedback.
Comment from words
Such a sweet and lovely write.
So full of love and heart and all of the wondrous stuff that makes human relationships so magical.
Your daughter and granddaughters are lucky to have you in their life.
It was such a pleasure to reivew this charming write.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Such a sweet and lovely write.
So full of love and heart and all of the wondrous stuff that makes human relationships so magical.
Your daughter and granddaughters are lucky to have you in their life.
It was such a pleasure to reivew this charming write.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2010
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Thanks again - first for reading and for the coveted "6"!
Comment from fictionwriter
It's wonderful you were allowed to still participate in your daughter's life. Too often the mother takes that away from the father. A wonderful little story. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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It's wonderful you were allowed to still participate in your daughter's life. Too often the mother takes that away from the father. A wonderful little story. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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Thanks for reading. It was more difficult, but I did my best to be as engaged as possible.
Comment from c_lucas
The funny thing about young mothers when they turn their child over to a grandparent, The grandparent had practiced with them. Everything ended right. Very well written.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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The funny thing about young mothers when they turn their child over to a grandparent, The grandparent had practiced with them. Everything ended right. Very well written.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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I have to smile because you are so right. I listened very politely to my daughter, but hey, been there done that. Thanks for reading. I'm always glad when you visit.
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You're welcome, Bill. Charlie
Comment from knowledge
You old swing you. Just reading this wonderful written post brings back memories of me and my only daughter when she was young. I now have 19 grandchildren and 16 of them are granddaughters! I appreciate the memories.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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You old swing you. Just reading this wonderful written post brings back memories of me and my only daughter when she was young. I now have 19 grandchildren and 16 of them are granddaughters! I appreciate the memories.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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19! That is something else. I have eight and things look like they will end there. Just don't get to see them as much as I want. Thanks for reading!
