Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello fionageorge
Oh the teacher must of been handsome, had a nice smile and loved children
Your entry made me smile.

Gert

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2009

Anything that can make someone smile, I am happy about. Pleased you enjoyed it. Cheers

Comment from Amfunny

Excellent

This is probably true for a lot of kids. This brings back lots of school memories. Very nicely done. It was a pleasure to read and review.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2009

Thank you. Glad you liked it, and thank you for your rating. Cheers

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

Cute!
I like this entry. :)
I can relate to this. I remember a crush I had on my 6th grade science teacher. He was awesome and made me feel special (because he knew I had a crush) but was never inappropriate.

I enjoyed your 6 word story. You did a nice job. Very expressive.
Nic

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009

Thank you. Oh yes, these early crushes, such impact.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Fiona

Just a few words to relate a tremendous amount of emotion.
You have accomplished it quite well. Enjoyed the little poem.

Thank you for sharing a special moment with the reader.

Carol

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009

You're very welcome Begin Again.

Comment from Jnetgame

Excellent

This is a great entry for the six word story contest about a first day at school. I'm curious what grade you were in when you developed a crush on your teacher. Nothing to change in this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009

Thank you. A very childish crush at the age of five. I was absolutely besotted (in a 5 year old way!). Thank you for your rating. fg

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

he was really cute eh?

excellent entry for the contest -

thank you for sharing it and joining in on the fun :)

good luck in the voting!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009

Actually she was. That in itself was a problem. But I had a crush for quite a while. Thanks for your rating and review, I appreciate it.

Comment from Thesis

Good

This was good. Itaks hard with a six word story. A firsty crush on the first day of school with a teacher. What can you say? - Thesis

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Thanks Thesis. I enjoyed putting it together. So many years later, and I still vividly remember it. Cheers

Comment from RADIO

Excellent

You certainly don't mince words as
you get right to the point. This
happens to the guys also. I still
remember Mrs. Ruddy who we used to wait
for and follow from school for as long
as we could.
Radio

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009

Thanks Radio. Well, wih six words, had to get to the point. The interim story also makes for good reading .... but six words tell the story as I remember it.

Comment from Paul Greatrix

Excellent

haha. Didnt you just sum it up! With the 1st day of school always comes with the anticipation of new teachers and crushes. Its inevitable.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009

Thank you Paul. appreciate your feedback and comments.

Comment from Queenise

Excellent

Let me give you what is possibly your first nudge to write a story about this little interesting piece. It is good. You stuck with the rules and produced a little piece of dynamite. Good flow. Would recommend.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009

Thank you. Just hope the dynamite is not too explosive!

reply by Queenise on 23-Sep-2009

You're welcome. Queenise