Dear Lexi
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Day of Promise""Let the little children come unto me." ~ Jesus
20 total reviews
Comment from babylonia
jan,
this really made me smile. how's your arm? are you able to pick her up yet? i bet she's getting sooooo big. they grow so fast.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2010
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jan,
this really made me smile. how's your arm? are you able to pick her up yet? i bet she's getting sooooo big. they grow so fast.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 06-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2010
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sorry for the very late response, I needed to take an extended hiatus from fanstory to take care of some family matters and am still trying to catch up with answering my reviews; love, jan
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jan,
no worries. i did that as well. in the middle of a contest no less. LOL oh well, sometimes we have to do what we have to do. hope your wrists are better. how's the grandbaby? growing bigger and stronger every day i imagine.
love,
barbara
Comment from Stergios Palaras Jr
How deep, sincere, clever and beautiful. The love for your granddaughter is also beautiful, and it does colors this poem. God bless you.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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How deep, sincere, clever and beautiful. The love for your granddaughter is also beautiful, and it does colors this poem. God bless you.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from joan marie
Never thought about it that way, but children are all colors. Not skin but the emotions of the colors. Great addition. joan marie
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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Never thought about it that way, but children are all colors. Not skin but the emotions of the colors. Great addition. joan marie
Comment Written 05-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 and found the "coloring" usage a double entendre, since you are referring to your adorable granddaughter. "Ultimate rainbow" makes a powerful satori for your heartfelt senryu.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I enjoyed your 5-7-5 and found the "coloring" usage a double entendre, since you are referring to your adorable granddaughter. "Ultimate rainbow" makes a powerful satori for your heartfelt senryu.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
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My remarks were well deserved. I hope your health improves soon. Best wishes- Joan
Comment from Nicnac
Aw, what a sweet little tidbit to savor.
Lovely presentation.
I'm so glad to read a Lexi poem! I've missed them. :)
Nic
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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Aw, what a sweet little tidbit to savor.
Lovely presentation.
I'm so glad to read a Lexi poem! I've missed them. :)
Nic
Comment Written 04-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning Jan. I think she will grow to treasure this book and you are to be commended for thinking ahead for her. All of us should do the same. Great! Loyd
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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Good morning Jan. I think she will grow to treasure this book and you are to be commended for thinking ahead for her. All of us should do the same. Great! Loyd
Comment Written 04-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
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:-) Loyd
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work here,the words so loving, caring ones and the rainbow, showing so much beauty here.
I love the way how these words were presented, and it is a pleasure to review such beauty.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I love the art work here,the words so loving, caring ones and the rainbow, showing so much beauty here.
I love the way how these words were presented, and it is a pleasure to review such beauty.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from Shirley B
What a great idea. Your granddaughter is very lucky to have a grandmother like you. I would love to do this. My son isn't married yet, but I am scared that after years of seizure medication my memory will fail me. Believe me , I have a lot of funny stories in me. You did a womderful job, Happy writing. Shirley
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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What a great idea. Your granddaughter is very lucky to have a grandmother like you. I would love to do this. My son isn't married yet, but I am scared that after years of seizure medication my memory will fail me. Believe me , I have a lot of funny stories in me. You did a womderful job, Happy writing. Shirley
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan (write your stories now)
Comment from Dogz
Well, from brown poop to lovely blue eyes, this is a great poem here. There is nothing like a beautiful child. Nice to see you back Jan, Dogz.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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Well, from brown poop to lovely blue eyes, this is a great poem here. There is nothing like a beautiful child. Nice to see you back Jan, Dogz.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
Comment from fictionwriter
There is nothing like a grandchild to make your world full of life again. I just had to stop reviewing to run outside and wave at mine as they drove by, because she hasn't seen me today. It's wonderful, just like this poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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There is nothing like a grandchild to make your world full of life again. I just had to stop reviewing to run outside and wave at mine as they drove by, because she hasn't seen me today. It's wonderful, just like this poem. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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I am both honored and humbled by your comments -- I'm sorry my health issues have caused me to get so far behind in acknowledging reviews but feel it is important to do so no matter how long it takes -- love, jan
