Take Me Back To The Good Ol' USA
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Comment from Domino
Hi, Babs.
Always good to see a free-thinker rather than a melling led by propaganda. Not sure I completely understand if this is a dig at the current administration or past mistakes in general.
Of course, it's never too late to be enlightened and take action - even if by a word that spreads.
Love, ray xx
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Hi, Babs.
Always good to see a free-thinker rather than a melling led by propaganda. Not sure I completely understand if this is a dig at the current administration or past mistakes in general.
Of course, it's never too late to be enlightened and take action - even if by a word that spreads.
Love, ray xx
Comment Written 03-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Thank you dear Ray. Blessings and love. Barbara
Comment from Nicky B
Despair will eventually turn to triumph I believe, though we are in the darkest slide at the moment. Keep waking us up Ma!
God bless. Nick.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Despair will eventually turn to triumph I believe, though we are in the darkest slide at the moment. Keep waking us up Ma!
God bless. Nick.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Thank you my dear Nick. Blessings and love, Ma
Comment from Mastery
Barb, I agree with you. But unfortunately a solid movement to correct the placid "norm" of today cannot gain any thunder. I dare say poll the seniors of this country...see what they say. LOL...Bob
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Barb, I agree with you. But unfortunately a solid movement to correct the placid "norm" of today cannot gain any thunder. I dare say poll the seniors of this country...see what they say. LOL...Bob
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Yup, amen Bob. Thank you, Blessings and love. Barbara
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
I believe you may have hit the nail on the head with your comment, or are there that many that just don't see it? I do believe more and more are waking up but perhaps it is too late, but maybe it is not. Prayer, my friend, this country needs to cry out to God for his mercy, that is what he is in search of, that is what it will take for him to intervene. Very well worded.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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I believe you may have hit the nail on the head with your comment, or are there that many that just don't see it? I do believe more and more are waking up but perhaps it is too late, but maybe it is not. Prayer, my friend, this country needs to cry out to God for his mercy, that is what he is in search of, that is what it will take for him to intervene. Very well worded.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Thank you dear sweet Dawn, Amen. Blessings and love. Barbara
Comment from MissMerri
I liked this poem for only one reason; it flows well. The word choices blend into a musical rhythm that is more poetic than sensible, it seemed to me. But I'm not commenting on the philosophical content, just the poetry.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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I liked this poem for only one reason; it flows well. The word choices blend into a musical rhythm that is more poetic than sensible, it seemed to me. But I'm not commenting on the philosophical content, just the poetry.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Thank you MM. Blessings and love. Barbara
Comment from Mitzi
This poem flowed with just the right punches of indignation and call to arms. Your shaping of the poem really worked in helping me to read it orally with passion...especially the first stanza and the last seven words. Being an old peacenik I have a little problem with the word "combat". It reminds me of "Onward Christian Soldiers". Loved the song but hated the sentiment. mitzi
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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This poem flowed with just the right punches of indignation and call to arms. Your shaping of the poem really worked in helping me to read it orally with passion...especially the first stanza and the last seven words. Being an old peacenik I have a little problem with the word "combat". It reminds me of "Onward Christian Soldiers". Loved the song but hated the sentiment. mitzi
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Thank you Mitzi. Blessings and Love. Barbara...combat was met in a possitive way here though.
Comment from Stergios Palaras Jr
I share your sentiments. The poem is amazing in its format! Its lines fade down, as the words' meanings also get darker and sadder, brilliant. It's a good start, if more of us speak out of our unhappiness. Perhaps someone will listen, someday.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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I share your sentiments. The poem is amazing in its format! Its lines fade down, as the words' meanings also get darker and sadder, brilliant. It's a good start, if more of us speak out of our unhappiness. Perhaps someone will listen, someday.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thank you. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from wierdgrace
I hope not, this i great writing, and the structure is good as well, emotions are out in the front of your writing, and no errors, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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I hope not, this i great writing, and the structure is good as well, emotions are out in the front of your writing, and no errors, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2009
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Thank you Grace. Blessings, Barbara
