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Lion of the Senate Myku 2

More myku on Kennedy and the times of his life

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Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
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A good morning to you Kit. A very befitting tribute to the memory and the life work of the Senator. I enjoyed and wish you the best. Thank you for sharing, Loyd

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 27-Aug-2009
    Thank you, Loyd. More are appearing on mykuworld. It's so exciting to see people connect! :)
Comment from Readywriter52
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You have created a great mythology about the man. He followed his family tradition of going into politics. If it hadn't been for the Chappaquiddick incident, he might have been president.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    I wonder if such a liberal would have been successful then as President or whether it would hve been much like Carter.
Comment from jeslaf
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It's almost as if his penance was to live so long after the others, to go through the pain of losing them all first, even Eunice, who just passed.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    To have become so good at his job as part of the process of healing and penance - a gift.
Comment from nora arjuna
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hi kit, nice poem. how's the structure of myku?

i'm not that familiar with the kennedys, but your poem about them is very informative and i enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    Each separate verse is a separate poem that stands alone but is also connected to the poems before and after. Myku has a maximum of 4 lines which may or may not rhyme. They may be in haiku format or in a limerick form where the two shortest lines of the limerick are written on one line, but they may also be iambic pentameter or have no specific meter. One myku inspires the next myku - they are written in a web of poetry so each poem is a node on the web and has anywhere from 3 to 8 poems connected to it. Titles may stay the same as the poem that provides the inspiration or the title may morph to reflect the focus of the new poem. I will put up a myku competition this weekend. (Have to review some more to earn the points to pay for it.)
Comment from grassroots08
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"he walked in the deep footsteps of his elders;' never were truer words spoken. We have no idea what could have been, had the other Kennedys lived. But time passes and with it do those we come to know and appreciate for all they have fought for in America. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Don

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    These days, with every death of my elders, I feel the mantle of social responsibility falling more heavily my shoulders and on those of my peers.
Comment from StevenJosephBruening
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Nice to see mykus used to create a fitting tribute to the late Senator Kennedy. You are correct in that they d stand alone but, put together, magnify their power intensely. Nice job.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    Thank you, dear Steven.
reply by StevenJosephBruening on 26-Aug-2009
    Your Welcome.
    ~ Steven
Comment from second thought
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Your poem is both educational and informative. A touch of emotion and history. John and Bobby's lives were so short,

yet memories of their passion still inspire;

now, Teddy's gone, we've lost all three,

his legacy, his bravery, I always will admire.
You have acknowledge two friends(nations). Thank You.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
    Thank you, Second Thought. When I was a child and we lost John and Bobby, I saw it so simply. Almost 50 years later, there is so much more to think about, so many facets to this death.
reply by second thought on 26-Aug-2009
    so goes life. we thank you.