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Comment from Jenna Ryan
I have always loved six word stories. They truly test the theater of the mind, and a talented wordsmith can provide that mental stimulation using only a few well chosen words. Well done!
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I have always loved six word stories. They truly test the theater of the mind, and a talented wordsmith can provide that mental stimulation using only a few well chosen words. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2009
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Jenna It was a moment in time that changed my life forever. After all these many years, it is a precious memory to me. Carol
Comment from Thesis
Carol, you've created a beautiful six word story that allows the reader to see the change through your words.
A boy and girl, an inspiration to kiss, then feelings, emotions and chemical reactions change everything.
Well told. - Thesis
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2009
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Carol, you've created a beautiful six word story that allows the reader to see the change through your words.
A boy and girl, an inspiration to kiss, then feelings, emotions and chemical reactions change everything.
Well told. - Thesis
Comment Written 03-Aug-2009
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Thesis... I am so happy that you recognized the awkward teenage girl swiftly changed into a young beauty simply by being kissed. Thanks so much. Carol
Comment from Amicus
Hey Carol, this is really clever. You use your six words very well to tell how a first kiss changed that tomboy's perspective promptly...oh the wonder of young hormones!
Excellent poem and pretty nifty presentation too.
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Hey Carol, this is really clever. You use your six words very well to tell how a first kiss changed that tomboy's perspective promptly...oh the wonder of young hormones!
Excellent poem and pretty nifty presentation too.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2009
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Amicus
Thank you for understanding the magical change from tomboy to beauty. Appreciate the review. Carol
Comment from Joan E.
That is quite a summer adventure and presenting in colors too!
I enjoyed your interpretation of the contest prompt and the picture you chose to illustrate your six-word story.
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That is quite a summer adventure and presenting in colors too!
I enjoyed your interpretation of the contest prompt and the picture you chose to illustrate your six-word story.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2009
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Joan An adventure that still holds a precious place in my hear forty four years later. A kiss that made a lasting impression. Carol
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It is amazing how we never forget those defining moments. Thanks for sharing. -Joan
Comment from Shane Marquardt
For such a short piece, you provided so many beautiful images. And you picture went so well with your post. The piece reminded me of a character I am working on, and you gave me inspiration to try to develop this character a little more. Thank you for that, and thanks for sharing.
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For such a short piece, you provided so many beautiful images. And you picture went so well with your post. The piece reminded me of a character I am working on, and you gave me inspiration to try to develop this character a little more. Thank you for that, and thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2009
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Shane
Thanks for the review. Did you understand that I was trying to say that a awkward tomboy's first kiss turned her into a a sweet young lady? Someone else said they didn't understand and now I'm worried. Carol
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I took it that the tomboy's kiss turned her into a woman. I thought you presented it very clear...and sweetly, if I might add.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I get it all but this; 'morphs'. I know what it means but what does it have to do with you. If you want to keep it a secret, I'll understand. My imagination is probably better anyway.
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I get it all but this; 'morphs'. I know what it means but what does it have to do with you. If you want to keep it a secret, I'll understand. My imagination is probably better anyway.
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2009
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I was an awkward skinny tomboy and I met a my first love on the Florida beaches and discovered I wanted to be a pretty girl instead. Does it makes sense to you now or should I change it?
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Yes it makes sense, good job.
