Comment from babylonia

Excellent

if anything can transform a tomboy back to a girl, a kiss of any sort would be it. i hope it was a very special one. made me smile. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2009

Barbara

It was a moment that after almost fifty years remains very vivid in mind and heart. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I greatly appreciate it. Carol

reply by babylonia on 12-Sep-2009

carol,
i know what you mean. it hasn't been that long since my first kiss. half of the fifty but i still remember it as if it were ten minutes ago. it took my breath away as did yours. i knew i was hooked and never wanted to stop kissing. jokes on me. hubby doesn't like to kiss like that.
love,
barbara

Comment from Razz

Excellent

I love this one. It is, so far, simply the best.

So rejuvinating.
Godd luck in the contest.

Have a blessed day.
Razz

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2009

Razz

It is a moment in time a long time ago that still remains in my heart. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Carol

Comment from Lastamen

Excellent

Such a delightful image of growing up and discovering the joy of young love and the wonder of romance when it is innocent and sweet. Precious memories.

Till the last amen

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2009

Last amen

Thank you for your kind review and thoughtful comments. I will remember this moment forever even though it was a long long time ago. Life moved on but that one tender moment remained. Thans again Carol

Comment from Mischief's Momma

Excellent

Aww - that is so sweet - and I can so identify with it!

Great job in telling such a large story in so few words - all the best in the contest!
MM

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2009

Mischief's Momma

It's a time in my life that will remain special forever. Life was so magical and I changed so much that summer. He still remains in my heart after so so many years. Thanks for the review and kind comments. Carol

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

So far this one is it for me. God...I remember my first holiday romance. There were no kisses but my imagination made up for that. Good luck with this great entry.
Freeflyer.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2009

Freeflyer

It was a moment I will never ever forget. I still fondly remember him. Thanks for the kind review. Carol

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

Waoh! What a story. Talk of a truly short story.
You have managed to tell a love story in six short words. I think you deserve to clinch the win in that contest. goodluck.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2009

Perp It was a first love and one I will never ever forget. It's been many years since that moment when I transformed from the caterpillar to the butterfly...but one that holds a place on the top shelf still. Thanks so much. Carol

Comment from MJMuraco

Excellent

Lovely story in only six words. That is a challenge and you took it and ran."Moonlight kiss, tomboy morphs, love blossoms"
So full of romance.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009

MJMuraco From caterpillar to butterfly. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from William Walz

Excellent

Really good. You said a lot in these six words, espcially how a person's perspective can change so very much by even a simple thing like a kiss. I really enjoyed this one.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009

William

Transformed from a caterpillar to a butterfly...Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from Blue Danube

Excellent

Begin Again:

This is a beautiful "Magical Transformation."

Also like the picture you have included with this entry.

Blue

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009

Blue

From a caterpillar to a butterfly...Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from bc1yax

Excellent

ah so sweet - so little words - but you gave us just the right words - don't know how you can find them but you do and we thank you for letting us see them -

-- bc1yax

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009

Thank you for the kind thoughts. I think it is difficult to put so much in so little words, but sometimes it comes together. This was a special moment in my life and will always remain so. Thanks for the review. Carol