Venus de Milo
My one and only limerick72 total reviews
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
::Grrrrrrrrrrrrooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnssssss. And then vomits in rage::
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Well, it's DEFINITELY a limerick . . .
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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::Grrrrrrrrrrrrooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnssssss. And then vomits in rage::
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Well, it's DEFINITELY a limerick . . .
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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Hey, I think it was a damn CUTE limerick! LOL Thank you, Nescher :-D Brooke and don't worry - it is my last sex poem ever!!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I LIKE TO SEE PIECES FROM SOME PEOPLE NOW AGAIN SHOWING THAT THEY HAVE A SENSE OF HUMOR LIKE YOU HAVE HERE BRIGHTENS MY DAY WELL DONE REGARDS FULLER
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2009
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I LIKE TO SEE PIECES FROM SOME PEOPLE NOW AGAIN SHOWING THAT THEY HAVE A SENSE OF HUMOR LIKE YOU HAVE HERE BRIGHTENS MY DAY WELL DONE REGARDS FULLER
Comment Written 21-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2009
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Glad you got a laugh out of this, Fuller - we can't be serious all the damned time! :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke Very witty and yes naughty, but I see your point having to cope with these pushy people. You amaze me how versatile you are. Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Hi Brooke Very witty and yes naughty, but I see your point having to cope with these pushy people. You amaze me how versatile you are. Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 17-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Thanks, Gaye - that's what I say - what is a nice lady to do with pushy friends other than give into them? LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from bard owl
What a unique challenge! You have met it very artistically. The fact that Venus was "disarmed" is disturbing, let alone having a penis. Excellent limerick. As with other kinds of poetry, the way it sounds when I read it aloud is what I think important. I didn't notice the extra syllable in the last line! Excellent limerick. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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What a unique challenge! You have met it very artistically. The fact that Venus was "disarmed" is disturbing, let alone having a penis. Excellent limerick. As with other kinds of poetry, the way it sounds when I read it aloud is what I think important. I didn't notice the extra syllable in the last line! Excellent limerick. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 17-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Thanks so much, Linda - this was fun to do even if it is scandalous! LOL Brooke
Comment from jadedgemini2
Falling to peer pressure now....*shaking head* *LOL*
I read a couple of those back-and-forth limericks and man were they funny-I especially like the 'morning wood' one:)
So how come your one and only limerick, that's a perfect time to let it all out without anyone thinking you're a perve:)
Your take on a limerick is classic, literally:) I think you are the only person to write one about a classic such as this, and the only one to even think about doing so!
Great job, I hope to see more of this side of you:)
Jaded:)
And just so you know, I didn't find this one all that bad. I have read FAR dirtier ones. With limericks- the dirtier, the better! *LMAO*
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Falling to peer pressure now....*shaking head* *LOL*
I read a couple of those back-and-forth limericks and man were they funny-I especially like the 'morning wood' one:)
So how come your one and only limerick, that's a perfect time to let it all out without anyone thinking you're a perve:)
Your take on a limerick is classic, literally:) I think you are the only person to write one about a classic such as this, and the only one to even think about doing so!
Great job, I hope to see more of this side of you:)
Jaded:)
And just so you know, I didn't find this one all that bad. I have read FAR dirtier ones. With limericks- the dirtier, the better! *LMAO*
Comment Written 17-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Tony and Norma Jean are great friends on site and they both kidded me into doing this - Tony is the one who told me to make it classy, which is what made me think of this. Oh, I know there are far dirtier ones, but they're not written by ME!!! LOL I have a guy who wants to become a minister, a minister, a nun, and an ex-nun who are fans of mine - believe me, this one is bad enough!!! LOL Thanks, Brooke
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Oh, come on now.........even they would get a laugh out of it:) *LOL* And if they didn't, it's only a few compared to the whole. One must choose, one or all? *LMAO* I'm sorry, I think the whole limerick thing going around is hilarious:)
But you did do a classy, yet funny one and you wrote it well. Like I said, I think you are THE only person I know who would think of using a piece of classic art when writing a limerick-even a classy one. That was funny all in itself:P
Jaded:)
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You're the best - actually, it only shook one of them up, and she was gracious about it, but I could tell she is really really h appy I plan to stay away from sex in my poems in the future! :-)
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Awww man, but those are the funny ones:) *LOL*
But I understand...
Hope she didn't rip on you for it though.
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No, she was quite gracious but also obviously quite sad. :-)
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That's too bad........but what was done was done. And it is no more. I'm sure she's happy about that:)
Comment from Lyrical_CD
Funny...yet so wrong in so many ways...I'm glad I don't have a picture to comment on, but the mental picture is there...thanks...anywho, different limerich than I'm used to but good write.
Cory
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Funny...yet so wrong in so many ways...I'm glad I don't have a picture to comment on, but the mental picture is there...thanks...anywho, different limerich than I'm used to but good write.
Cory
Comment Written 17-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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You really do have to read today's poem, creation sings the melody after reading this!!! I need to redeem myself. Believe me, this is the last "different" poem you'll be reading from me! LOL Thanks, Cory :-) Brooke
Comment from aviddbrut
ha! nice job brooke. I certainly hope it isn't your last limerick. my question is, we know she is missing an arm...but how do we know what else she may be missing? just because we see no penis, doesn't mean there wasn't one to begin with. I'm only saying......
fun piece.
david
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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ha! nice job brooke. I certainly hope it isn't your last limerick. my question is, we know she is missing an arm...but how do we know what else she may be missing? just because we see no penis, doesn't mean there wasn't one to begin with. I'm only saying......
fun piece.
david
Comment Written 17-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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David, you're a man of the cloth!!! LOL I thought I was bad enough writing this darned thing, and now I find out you're going to be accompanying me to hell! LOL Thanks for your smile-inducing response to my bit of wickedness. Brooke :-)
Comment from MJMuraco
This poem has great ryhthm and ryhme. The words flow nicely and I laughed out loud at the content. It is so different than what you usually write.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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This poem has great ryhthm and ryhme. The words flow nicely and I laughed out loud at the content. It is so different than what you usually write.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Yes, it is different - it is also the beginning and the end of my bawdy limerick career. LOL Thanks so much. Brooke :-)
Comment from LovnPeace
This was great. I did Laugh Out Load. I wasn't expecting that punch line and the visual was terrific. Thanks I needed that. Blessings. Barbara
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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This was great. I did Laugh Out Load. I wasn't expecting that punch line and the visual was terrific. Thanks I needed that. Blessings. Barbara
Comment Written 16-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009
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Barbara, thanks - so glad to add a laugh into your life :-D Brooke
Comment from Mike K2
Yikes! Only in today's world can one think up a poem like this. With all of your fantastic art poems, this one was an unexpected shock. I had to even double check the member name. Talk about swinging barefoot!
I enjoyed this limerick and it really is one of the best constructions that I have read. You should be proud of this well written and thought out poem.
Speaking of Venus, I promised a member that I would grow my hair long. Well I finally let it down and combed it out. I wasn't prepared to look in the mirror and see David Carradine. I hope I have a better end.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2009
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Yikes! Only in today's world can one think up a poem like this. With all of your fantastic art poems, this one was an unexpected shock. I had to even double check the member name. Talk about swinging barefoot!
I enjoyed this limerick and it really is one of the best constructions that I have read. You should be proud of this well written and thought out poem.
Speaking of Venus, I promised a member that I would grow my hair long. Well I finally let it down and combed it out. I wasn't prepared to look in the mirror and see David Carradine. I hope I have a better end.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2009
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Mike, thank you. This will be my first and last "sex poem."
I'm glad you enjoyed it - talk about not outgrowing the impulse to take a dare!! LOL I sure hope you have a better end than David C also!!!! Brooke :-)
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Don't make it your last. I really enjoyed the humor about it. These days, I have to work so hard, I miss a lot of what is happening on the site. I had a few friends that always kept me up to date, but they dropped off of the site. I am working so hard, that I really can't interact the way I have enjoyed doing so in the past.
