Blue Thong
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Comment from joan marie
I used to hesitate to open these. Then discovered most are tasteful like this one. I don't bend over to get anything out of my car anymore. The last time I did a man did more than just look. Great entry. joan marie
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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I used to hesitate to open these. Then discovered most are tasteful like this one. I don't bend over to get anything out of my car anymore. The last time I did a man did more than just look. Great entry. joan marie
Comment Written 11-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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Sorry to hera that Joan Marie. There are some creeps out there. I hope you've been able to move on from that experience.
I'm glad you opened this story. I believe the female form is one to be admired and praised. If it's not tasteful, I won't write it. Thanks again. - Thesis
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I have found that most people using the mature only warning aren't writing anything so terrilbly pornographic. Perhaps it is to respect the reader who doesn't want to read these at all. Some I've read I didn't think needed the warning and I've seen some without it that should. jm
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Thesis...why do I think this may have been written from the experience of the author?? You managed to write a book in 25 to 50 words and even without the picture gave this reader a glimpse of what you saw. Nary a letter 's.' Well done. Good luck in the contest.....chey
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Hi Thesis...why do I think this may have been written from the experience of the author?? You managed to write a book in 25 to 50 words and even without the picture gave this reader a glimpse of what you saw. Nary a letter 's.' Well done. Good luck in the contest.....chey
Comment Written 10-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Oops, caught! There are some similarities to an experience, Lol. Thanks for your kind review and comments. - Thesis
Comment from bc1yax
what can I say - picture was bueatifull and the short story was most enjoyable - to us only twenty five words, you did a excellent job - and so was the picture -
bc1yax
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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what can I say - picture was bueatifull and the short story was most enjoyable - to us only twenty five words, you did a excellent job - and so was the picture -
bc1yax
Comment Written 10-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Thanks bc. That picture was worth more than a thousand words, lol. - Thanks for reading. - Thesis
Comment from steevo
A great redefining of "flash" fiction.
It's just one of life's moments when the planets and stars align. Besides--if she didn't want to be noticed...
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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A great redefining of "flash" fiction.
It's just one of life's moments when the planets and stars align. Besides--if she didn't want to be noticed...
Comment Written 10-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Steevo, I like how guy's understand this stuff. - Thanks for reading. - Thesis
Comment from Shirley B
Great job. You followed the rules and did not use the letter s one time. I will not ask how this subjest matter came up. I thought about entering, but it seemed I use s way to much. Good luck in the contest Shirley. See I couldn't even sign my name!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Great job. You followed the rules and did not use the letter s one time. I will not ask how this subjest matter came up. I thought about entering, but it seemed I use s way to much. Good luck in the contest Shirley. See I couldn't even sign my name!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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LOL, Yeah Shirley, it would be difficult for you not to be able to use your name. Thanks for the kind words and for reading the story. - Thesis
Comment from Catseyes
Growl! You sure did a good job painting a naughty scene with no "s" letter used, a scene that probably gets played out, in the industrialized western world, anyway, many times by narcissistic Monica wannabe nymphets. Thongs still leave me straddling the fence per the constant wedgie issue, and between us adults I find more is sometimes less in packaging the female form, as in boy-shorts lace undies coming to light at the hemline rides up. Cute photo too!!!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Growl! You sure did a good job painting a naughty scene with no "s" letter used, a scene that probably gets played out, in the industrialized western world, anyway, many times by narcissistic Monica wannabe nymphets. Thongs still leave me straddling the fence per the constant wedgie issue, and between us adults I find more is sometimes less in packaging the female form, as in boy-shorts lace undies coming to light at the hemline rides up. Cute photo too!!!!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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I agree. The mystery of a woman is better revealed in layers. I think it's more arousing than nudity.
After all, the fun is in discovery, :) - Thesis
Comment from tonydem
This is very funny. But please tell me this picture wasn't taken in Thailand. If so I have my doubts as to whether or not this is a woman. LOL Perfect ASS would have worked so much better. (I know rules rules rules.)
Great job,
Tony
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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This is very funny. But please tell me this picture wasn't taken in Thailand. If so I have my doubts as to whether or not this is a woman. LOL Perfect ASS would have worked so much better. (I know rules rules rules.)
Great job,
Tony
Comment Written 09-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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LOL, It was hard not working with an "s". NO, the picture is not from Thailand, but rather from a neighbor who read my story and volunteered to pose. It was a good day. :) - Thesis
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My neighbors are eighty. ewe.
Tony
Comment from jeslaf
I've seen more thongs than I'd like lately, from more bodies better left covered up. The funniest of these, however, was when my own mother, now nearly 60, was in the shop with my children, bent over, and we ALL got a view of the top of her black lace G-string. Another memory to block forever...you did a great job with this one, believable, funny, and all without the banned letter.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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I've seen more thongs than I'd like lately, from more bodies better left covered up. The funniest of these, however, was when my own mother, now nearly 60, was in the shop with my children, bent over, and we ALL got a view of the top of her black lace G-string. Another memory to block forever...you did a great job with this one, believable, funny, and all without the banned letter.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Hmmm, you're right, some pictures are best left unseen. LOL
Thanks for the great review. Glad you liked the story. - Thesis
Comment from DictionaryGirl
Ok I know this isn't about the picture but I have to say I HATE upskirt pics. I just hope this one was taken of a WILLING grown woman... anyway I DO think it added to the story and the story was great by the way :-) It was actually super sexy and kind of cute!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Ok I know this isn't about the picture but I have to say I HATE upskirt pics. I just hope this one was taken of a WILLING grown woman... anyway I DO think it added to the story and the story was great by the way :-) It was actually super sexy and kind of cute!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2009
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Thank you. I think it was very sexy and playful. Knowing who is in the picture helps. It was not a random upskirt picture. A friend posed and really got into the role. LOL - Thesis
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Well thats good to know LoL.... that makes the pic even better!
Comment from Slush Pile
Whoa, this is the shortest hemline I've ever heard of, other than, say, a tennis 'skort'. But they don't wear thongs with those, do they? So, I'm 'gonna guess that the highlight of this gal's day is to bend over and tease. Maybe that's the biggest thrill she gets all day. Oh poor thing... LOL :-) Good Luck in the contest, Slush Pile
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2009
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Whoa, this is the shortest hemline I've ever heard of, other than, say, a tennis 'skort'. But they don't wear thongs with those, do they? So, I'm 'gonna guess that the highlight of this gal's day is to bend over and tease. Maybe that's the biggest thrill she gets all day. Oh poor thing... LOL :-) Good Luck in the contest, Slush Pile
Comment Written 09-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2009
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Thanks Slush Pile. Yes, it was very distracting to say the least. - Thesis
