Blue Thong
A great view51 total reviews
Comment from Wild Flower
Lol, typical man! Heehee. Seriously though if she was going to show it I'd probably have to look too. Great job of telling a story in such few words. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Lol, typical man! Heehee. Seriously though if she was going to show it I'd probably have to look too. Great job of telling a story in such few words. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Viva la difference! LOL, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. - Thesis
Comment from jadapenn
You sure got the essence of the story across in this short - short story and skirt. lol. I enjoyed this contest entry although the photo is not my girlie cup of tea. Guess it's enough to make a guy go beserk.
Well penned. regards jada
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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You sure got the essence of the story across in this short - short story and skirt. lol. I enjoyed this contest entry although the photo is not my girlie cup of tea. Guess it's enough to make a guy go beserk.
Well penned. regards jada
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Thanks Jada. Yeah, male hormones pick up on lots of visuals, LOL. - Thesis
Comment from Adri7enne
Well done, Thesis. Short, simple, to the point, without sacrificing anything to the letter "S" or its lack thereof. Gives us a view into the male psyche, too. Guess it's true what they say about men thinking about sex at least (5 -6 times??) an hour.
Good write, LOL.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Well done, Thesis. Short, simple, to the point, without sacrificing anything to the letter "S" or its lack thereof. Gives us a view into the male psyche, too. Guess it's true what they say about men thinking about sex at least (5 -6 times??) an hour.
Good write, LOL.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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I thought that was per minute, LOL. Thanks for your comments and a great review. - Thesis
Comment from Colette
Congratulations! you have just won first prize. The title caught my attention
However, just one thing, if you were behind her and she was bending over, how
did she catch catch your "eye" no enough already. Colette
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Congratulations! you have just won first prize. The title caught my attention
However, just one thing, if you were behind her and she was bending over, how
did she catch catch your "eye" no enough already. Colette
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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She was very flexible, LOL. Thanks for the great review. I'm glad that I caught your attention. - Thesis
Comment from Siren_116
I understand the constraints you were working under, not being able to use the letter "S" and the word count you were restricted to. But the story wasn't very descriptive, in my opinion.
Also you didn't site the source of the picture. (some note should be made of that)
All in all, the idea was a good one.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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I understand the constraints you were working under, not being able to use the letter "S" and the word count you were restricted to. But the story wasn't very descriptive, in my opinion.
Also you didn't site the source of the picture. (some note should be made of that)
All in all, the idea was a good one.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Thanks Siren. It was one of my own pictures. FanArtReview lately, does not have any good erotic pictures. Many artists have pulled their work because of nasty reviews.
Thanks for reading. - Thesis
Comment from anabelle
Quite the view indeed Thesis. Difficult for me to say much else. Very creative.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Quite the view indeed Thesis. Difficult for me to say much else. Very creative.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Thanks anabelle. Yes, the picture compliments the story well. Thanks for reading and the great review. - Thesis
Comment from KennyRogers
Hi there Thesis. loved this little snapshot in the life of a voyeur, which is very aptly complemented by the artwork.
It's not everyday that an exhibitionist happens along.
Bestwishes, Kenny
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Hi there Thesis. loved this little snapshot in the life of a voyeur, which is very aptly complemented by the artwork.
It's not everyday that an exhibitionist happens along.
Bestwishes, Kenny
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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True Kenny. It is a rare event, one which must be properly remembered. Thanks for reading and for your great review. - Thesis
Comment from Kristia
Hi
OHHH naughty! Nice work. How many times has this actually happened? lol. The flow of your piece is good and of course it brings imagery :). Good luck with the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Hi
OHHH naughty! Nice work. How many times has this actually happened? lol. The flow of your piece is good and of course it brings imagery :). Good luck with the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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LOL, yes, quite naughty. It happens more often than one might think. Sometimes the stars align and a woman feels playful, resulting in a gift that you would never expect to receive.
Thanks for reading and your great review. - Thesis
Comment from Phil Kitom
It is easy to see why this work has been given a warning rating. It is not often that artwork can create such a
stunning effect in support of the authors work but I think this is indeed the case here. Good luck with the contest, if the judges are unsure who's to pick, yours will probably win by a close shave. LOL. Good luck
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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It is easy to see why this work has been given a warning rating. It is not often that artwork can create such a
stunning effect in support of the authors work but I think this is indeed the case here. Good luck with the contest, if the judges are unsure who's to pick, yours will probably win by a close shave. LOL. Good luck
Comment Written 12-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2009
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Thanks Phil. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the visual. - Thesis
Comment from Psychonaut X
I wouldn't exactly say this had strong sexual content, it was actually pretty tame. But, better safe than sorry I suppose. Exactly 50 words long and no S. I couldn't find any SPAG. An enjoyable read. Not as enjoyable as staring at a perfect ass, but enjoyable nonetheless.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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I wouldn't exactly say this had strong sexual content, it was actually pretty tame. But, better safe than sorry I suppose. Exactly 50 words long and no S. I couldn't find any SPAG. An enjoyable read. Not as enjoyable as staring at a perfect ass, but enjoyable nonetheless.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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Tom changed it to Mature. I didn't think it was that bad, but the picture brought it over the top. Thanks for a great review. - Thesis
