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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Bountiful Love"
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Comment from malachi1206
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I am a better poetry reviewer than short story reviewer so when I saw this I said this is the one to read and I really enjoyed it we really all need to count our blessings when times are tough and it was thoughtful of you to share your blessings with all on the site excellent malachi1206

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2009

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    malachi..

    My family and their love have seen me through many dark times. I thank you for reviewing and for your kind words.I am usually a story writer, but these words came with ease..I guess it was just my heart talking. Thanks again - Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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VEry good. Again you did great with only 9 words. While I was reading my 16 year old son came in and looked over my shoulder. "Is that Haihu?" My response was "Yes." He came back. "Yuck, poetry. It sounds like school. " He left. Don't take offense. If it's not made of leather and shaped like a football he won't like it. He's an O-line man and never touches the ball either.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2009

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    Barbara...

    No offense taken...My grandson's would same the same. Thank you for reading I greatly appreciate you stopping by. Take care. Carol
Comment from sherrymccall
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Girlfriend you continue to outdo yourself. Everything that i read of yours i think, wow.... Then i read something else and continue to be touched and moved with each new piece you write. This is absolutely awesome. I love it !!!! you have such a special gift.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2009

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    Sherry,

    Without my family and their love, I would never have made it through so many dark times. Thanks ....I hope you too have found some peace. Carol
Comment from Vladilynn
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Hi Carol yes!!! the joy with family really comforts us. They're the one who'll not leave us..having the thick bond makes us ease to our daily life. Very nice Haiku to share.

Thank you for sharing

Love much

Lynn ( ^ __________ ^ )
Take care~

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2009

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    Lynn

    Thank you so much for your kind comments. They are great appreciated. Carol
Comment from lola29
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I knew in my heart that your writing would be exquisite. Your sentiments echo to all the world as a resounding truth. Family is the center of love.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2009

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    Lola...

    Thank you for your kindness. Without my family and love, I would never have made it through the darkest hours. Thanks for reading my poem. Your friend, Carol
Comment from Jean Lutz
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Your words and art work together to deliver a double blessing. That of your physical family - parents, siblings, husband and children; and your spiritual family. Through our believe in Christ we are spiritual brothers and sisters.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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    Jean

    Thank you for your kind words and the thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
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I am not a big fan of haiku. However, I am a big fan of family and this really hits the button. Great piece of writing.
good luck in the contest.
Warmest wishes
Kat

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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    Kat...

    Thank you for your kind words and your review. I am not a big fan of haiku either. I just thought I would give it a try once. Thanks again Carol

Comment from Alexander E Poet
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excellent I love the way you look at life in this! So much passion! The first stanza drew me in and the rest kept me reading.Outstanding! Your beautiful words are well penned rhyme and meaningful h No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can aee.Alexander QQ...

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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    AlexanderT

    ank you for reviewing and for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. Thanks again Carol
Comment from RaymondJohn
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Very touching. I think we begin anew with our family every day. Good Haiku with fine movement in the words, instruction and a nice surprise ending. Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Ray

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

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    Ray..

    Thank you for your kind words. I greatly appreciate them. Family and their love is the foundation of life. CArol
Comment from Phoenix Rising
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Simple thoughts in simple terms, speak volumes from the heat. An excellent haiku. Best of luck with this lovely entry.

PR

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2009
    Phoenix Rising...

    Thank you for your kind and generous words. I appreciate them very much. Carol