Challenge Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "joy"I dare you....
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Comment from Steve Pantazis
"Rosy cheeks with muscles hurting from happiness" definitely made this piece remarkable. It says laughter in a such an interesting way. I didn't find the hidden message...sorry. Then again, I probably need to focus harder.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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"Rosy cheeks with muscles hurting from happiness" definitely made this piece remarkable. It says laughter in a such an interesting way. I didn't find the hidden message...sorry. Then again, I probably need to focus harder.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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it's the first 6-syllable line and all the following 3-syllable lines :)
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Luna does set some challenges! I am not familiar with this form, but I must say, I have ver much enjoyed reading. I found the piece relaxing and uplifting. Very well written.
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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Luna does set some challenges! I am not familiar with this form, but I must say, I have ver much enjoyed reading. I found the piece relaxing and uplifting. Very well written.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 23-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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thank you so much! :)
