Kiss Me
More Whimsy with Flowers - see author's notes101 total reviews
Comment from Jewell McChesney
This would get a sixer if I had one left for you.
Brooke, you amaze me. This is fabulous writing and you are correct, the names of those flowers are so delightful and stuff poetry is made of! Love it!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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This would get a sixer if I had one left for you.
Brooke, you amaze me. This is fabulous writing and you are correct, the names of those flowers are so delightful and stuff poetry is made of! Love it!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Thanks so much, Jewell. I had a grand time with this after I found all these new names :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written poem/ We should always do something, on a daily basis, to let our loved one know how special they are in our lives.
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This is a very well written poem/ We should always do something, on a daily basis, to let our loved one know how special they are in our lives.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Charlie, I agree with you totally!! Thanks, my friend. :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from mslyla216
Excellent and delightful, Brooke! This poem shows great imagination in having the lovely names of these lovely flowers tell such a great story. I adore the third verse; I'd love to tie the knot with satin slippers and pink champagne as my beau declared to forget me not. Super. Lyla
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Excellent and delightful, Brooke! This poem shows great imagination in having the lovely names of these lovely flowers tell such a great story. I adore the third verse; I'd love to tie the knot with satin slippers and pink champagne as my beau declared to forget me not. Super. Lyla
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
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Lyla, the names are such an inspiration!! Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from GABSTBOZ
Hi B
Very creatively done . A wedding of words . I love the smooth romantic flow,with an old world charm in your poem "Kiss Me"
Smiles
Gabor
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Hi B
Very creatively done . A wedding of words . I love the smooth romantic flow,with an old world charm in your poem "Kiss Me"
Smiles
Gabor
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Thank you so much, Gabor :-) I appreciate your most generous response to this bit of whimsy. Brooke :-)
Comment from fictionwriter
Oh man, my favorite kind of poem from you. I love the names of the flowers woven into this delightful poem. I wish it was the true fairytale. Sigh. LOL. I want that to be me. Well done, great job and all the other things that I can't think of right now. This is one of my very favorites. JOY
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Oh man, my favorite kind of poem from you. I love the names of the flowers woven into this delightful poem. I wish it was the true fairytale. Sigh. LOL. I want that to be me. Well done, great job and all the other things that I can't think of right now. This is one of my very favorites. JOY
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Joy, God bless you - I just had about six people tell me they wanted to give me a six but couldn't because they've already given me my two sixes for the month. It is lovely that you have done this. Thank you! Brooke :-)
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I would give you sixes all the time if I could, but I feel like I need to spread them around a bit. I'm a great fan though and always will be. I love all your stuff, but some I just can't help it when they bring tears to my eyes and make me laugh all at the same time. Joy
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that's ok - you can't give me more than two a month anyway! I'm just glad you did this time since so many other people were blocked. :-) Brooke
Comment from Stacy L. Kersten
This is a lovely and enduring poem which represents the hope and invitation of everlasting love. Exhibits beautiful language.
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This is a lovely and enduring poem which represents the hope and invitation of everlasting love. Exhibits beautiful language.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Stacy Lynn, thank you :-) I really appreciate your kind words. Brooke
Comment from Amfunny
Beautiful!!! No deer, but still beautiful. I love this poem. I can tell you are easily inspired and that is a very good thing. This was an absolute delight to read and review. :)
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Beautiful!!! No deer, but still beautiful. I love this poem. I can tell you are easily inspired and that is a very good thing. This was an absolute delight to read and review. :)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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I suppose I could have them ride off into the sunset on a deer :-) Of course, my deer don't move. LOL Thanks, dear friend. Brooke :-)
Comment from Phil Kitom
My my there are certainly a lot of goings on with
these flowers Brooke. No wonder there are so
many people with green fingers LOL.. Nice poem...
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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My my there are certainly a lot of goings on with
these flowers Brooke. No wonder there are so
many people with green fingers LOL.. Nice poem...
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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Dave, thank you. Hey, why do you think there are billions of flowers out there - we need a bit of hanky panky first!! LOL Brooke
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Sounds good to me i will follow you into the garden LOL
Comment from tonydem
This is very a pretty and whimsical poem. It was a delight to read and review. You are so clever and witty and it seems at the drop of a hat. Lovely poem.(Ok, right about now, Brooke, your saying to yourself, "I know it says tonydem but someone has to have take over his body or he's into the Xanax again.) Well it's me. I can be sweet.
Tony
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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This is very a pretty and whimsical poem. It was a delight to read and review. You are so clever and witty and it seems at the drop of a hat. Lovely poem.(Ok, right about now, Brooke, your saying to yourself, "I know it says tonydem but someone has to have take over his body or he's into the Xanax again.) Well it's me. I can be sweet.
Tony
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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I had no doubt you can be sweet - you are, after all, a loving husband and doting dad. :-) Thank you, Tony. Brooke :-)
Comment from SoulSong
This is sweet! A gentle loving poem with a different point of view. Love it. Will have to investigate all of those new (to me) flower names.
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This is sweet! A gentle loving poem with a different point of view. Love it. Will have to investigate all of those new (to me) flower names.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
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selectseeds.com is where I got most of the names, and they have photos of them and other info. Thanks so much. Brooke :-)
