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Viewing comments for Chapter 310 "Brown + Holland = Marriage"Life stories in only six words!
11 total reviews
Comment from EllieKaye
Oh, this is a sweet one! I really like it. It's one of those short but long stories with a happy ending! Good luck to you in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Oh, this is a sweet one! I really like it. It's one of those short but long stories with a happy ending! Good luck to you in the contest. :)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
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I had no idea you were in a cast. :( I hope the healing has taken place and that you are able to write and post again soon. Take care!
hugs,
LEK
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I was just thinking about how my parents will be married 30 years tomarrow. Even though they aren't the happiest people in the world they are still together. For better or worse and sickness and health. Great job and I wish you many more years with Aubrey
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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I was just thinking about how my parents will be married 30 years tomarrow. Even though they aren't the happiest people in the world they are still together. For better or worse and sickness and health. Great job and I wish you many more years with Aubrey
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from shelley kaye
YAY!
brings hope that true love wins!
great one!!!!
than kyou for sharing and congrats on your marraige! :-)
good luck inc the contest! :)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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YAY!
brings hope that true love wins!
great one!!!!
than kyou for sharing and congrats on your marraige! :-)
good luck inc the contest! :)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from rama devi
Lovely theme and well delivered in six word style. I think the photo complements the work nicely. No nits in this. Sis word review:
Best of luck in the contest!
Love, rd
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Lovely theme and well delivered in six word style. I think the photo complements the work nicely. No nits in this. Sis word review:
Best of luck in the contest!
Love, rd
Comment Written 27-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from babylonia
jan,
LOL i hope it's better than my cousin's marriage. they were high school sweethearts. baby made three. they are still married but man ... LOL it does happen, and happily for many. great one.
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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jan,
LOL i hope it's better than my cousin's marriage. they were high school sweethearts. baby made three. they are still married but man ... LOL it does happen, and happily for many. great one.
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 26-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
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jan,
i hope you don't get a new one either. hope all is going well.
love,
barbara
Comment from Nicnac
Woohoo!
This is something to shout about!
True love stands the test of time. Your short entry displays the longevity of young love.
Great job - on your entry - and your marriage!
Best wishes,
Nic
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Woohoo!
This is something to shout about!
True love stands the test of time. Your short entry displays the longevity of young love.
Great job - on your entry - and your marriage!
Best wishes,
Nic
Comment Written 25-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from Kit Minden
What I like about this 6 word poem is that it leaves me wanting to hear the rest of the story. I want to know how they made it and for how many years, among other things.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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What I like about this 6 word poem is that it leaves me wanting to hear the rest of the story. I want to know how they made it and for how many years, among other things.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
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Long, hot summer for you. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
Kit
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Congradulations of the new project. Not only did I love this poem but I think it's how it should be.
I will not be able to review for a while, I am out town. If you have something in particular that you want me to look at, send me a PM. Loyd
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Congradulations of the new project. Not only did I love this poem but I think it's how it should be.
I will not be able to review for a while, I am out town. If you have something in particular that you want me to look at, send me a PM. Loyd
Comment Written 25-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
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You take it easy and heal real good. Loyd
Comment from adewpearl
God bless you - my high school sweetheart and I didn't last thirteen years. What a nice graduation story - when I feel jaded about things like young marriages, I like to be reminded that some worked out :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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God bless you - my high school sweetheart and I didn't last thirteen years. What a nice graduation story - when I feel jaded about things like young marriages, I like to be reminded that some worked out :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
Comment from joan marie
This sure encourages long term love. I know marriage is now a throw away kind of thing and this story restores my faith that it can work. Kudos to you and yours, joan marie
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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This sure encourages long term love. I know marriage is now a throw away kind of thing and this story restores my faith that it can work. Kudos to you and yours, joan marie
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Cast comes off on Tuesday, the 18th--hoping not to get a new one. thanks for your comments. love, jan
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You'res comes off and on the 21st I get my arm operated on. They are finally taking out the hardeware that held the bone together while it healed. Welcome back, take it really easy. Don't worry about catching up on me. I tried reading everything after tumor operation and almost killed myself. Glad your back. jm
