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Comment from Gert sherwood
Oh sheeley,
this thought I have seen from you before and every time I read it,it breaks my heart.
a very sad expressed pathos poem
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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Oh sheeley,
this thought I have seen from you before and every time I read it,it breaks my heart.
a very sad expressed pathos poem
Gert
Comment Written 17-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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thnak you much :)
Comment from luna
I'll let you have a go at the father this time. I was gonna put something together, but don't feel like it now. I hope writing this helped.
Love,
GM *smile*
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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I'll let you have a go at the father this time. I was gonna put something together, but don't feel like it now. I hope writing this helped.
Love,
GM *smile*
Comment Written 17-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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writing always helps! LOL! :)
Comment from Narvik
Shelley, this was extremely disturbing to read. I don't know what to say about such horror, never experiencing anything close to this myself. This kind of behavior is beyond evil, and the pain it caused I can't even imagine. I've never seen this subject put so poignantly, let alone so concise. The white and red references made my skin crawl. I'm at a loss for words, Shelley, and I'm not the emotional type at all. God bless you.
~ Rhein
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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Shelley, this was extremely disturbing to read. I don't know what to say about such horror, never experiencing anything close to this myself. This kind of behavior is beyond evil, and the pain it caused I can't even imagine. I've never seen this subject put so poignantly, let alone so concise. The white and red references made my skin crawl. I'm at a loss for words, Shelley, and I'm not the emotional type at all. God bless you.
~ Rhein
Comment Written 17-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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cool- glad my writing had that effect on ya! :)
Comment from babylonia
shelley,
i wish that you had good memories of your dad but we can't change what has happened. take it one moment at a time. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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shelley,
i wish that you had good memories of your dad but we can't change what has happened. take it one moment at a time. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 17-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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yep- take life one day, one hour, one minute at a time :)
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one minute ... one hour ... yep
Comment from mmichelle97219
You have no idea how much this one bugged me. Mostly because i have seen so many kids tell the sam horrible tale. good piece.
michelle
ps still waiting for my vampire story :-P
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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You have no idea how much this one bugged me. Mostly because i have seen so many kids tell the sam horrible tale. good piece.
michelle
ps still waiting for my vampire story :-P
Comment Written 17-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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workin' on it! stuck for a good surprising ending - gonna wait a few days and then read what i have again :)
Comment from Justin Chopin
Sorry that you had to endure that. Great job with the poetry absolutely loved it and thought that it was very well written.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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Sorry that you had to endure that. Great job with the poetry absolutely loved it and thought that it was very well written.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
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thankyalots! :)
