Wildflower Haiku
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Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke, Havn't heard the name of this flower, but your haiku has described it well, it shows so well that this plant thrives in the shade. Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
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Hi Brooke, Havn't heard the name of this flower, but your haiku has described it well, it shows so well that this plant thrives in the shade. Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 22-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2009
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Thank you, Gaye - this is such a gorgeous flower, but many people have never seen them, even those who live in the regions where they grow. Brooke :-)
Comment from Begin Again
Brooke...
No one could ever shoot a master of such beautiful words.
You simply amaze me how you can paint these lovely pictures with so few words. A book of these pictures and your words would be fabulous.
Thanks for sharing. Carol C
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2009
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Brooke...
No one could ever shoot a master of such beautiful words.
You simply amaze me how you can paint these lovely pictures with so few words. A book of these pictures and your words would be fabulous.
Thanks for sharing. Carol C
Comment Written 20-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2009
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Thank you, Carol - I appreciate your many lovely comments and visits - so glad this wildflower series is going over well with you! Brooke :-)
Comment from honeytree
What a wonderful piece of art work that is perfect for your wonderful words, that are truly beautiful and your words written here is nature, and how nature is. I love your words taht are brilliant.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2009
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What a wonderful piece of art work that is perfect for your wonderful words, that are truly beautiful and your words written here is nature, and how nature is. I love your words taht are brilliant.
Honeytree
Comment Written 20-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2009
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Thank you, Annie - it is always wonderful to hear from you :-) Brooke
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I am glad you liked the review. I really enjoyed reading. Honeytree.
Comment from jmyron
Shoot you? No. The result was just too good. Isn't amazing how much effort is needed to write such a little poem. Lends credence to the concept of 'less is more.'
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Shoot you? No. The result was just too good. Isn't amazing how much effort is needed to write such a little poem. Lends credence to the concept of 'less is more.'
Comment Written 19-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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What a nice thing to say - thank you, John. Brooke :-)
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Adewpearl ...
Well - it sounds to me as if you really have had a great idea and I like the picture at the top - presuming that it is the flower under the leaves that you describe as "Jack in the Pulpit."
Of course, there is nothing to suggest changing and
I hope you continue to be so inspired !!
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Hullo Adewpearl ...
Well - it sounds to me as if you really have had a great idea and I like the picture at the top - presuming that it is the flower under the leaves that you describe as "Jack in the Pulpit."
Of course, there is nothing to suggest changing and
I hope you continue to be so inspired !!
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Yes, this is definitely a picture of a jack in the pulpit. Th anks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Treesaw
Do it! I'd love a whole book of haiku about wildflowers. This (and the others) is just another example of fine writing. A perfect little piece of, well, perfection.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Do it! I'd love a whole book of haiku about wildflowers. This (and the others) is just another example of fine writing. A perfect little piece of, well, perfection.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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You are just what I need :-) Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Brooke a great idea hakiu on wildflowers--
jack in the pulpit always fantasized me when I viewed them deep within the woods. Just as you words so perfectly described
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Hello Brooke a great idea hakiu on wildflowers--
jack in the pulpit always fantasized me when I viewed them deep within the woods. Just as you words so perfectly described
Gert
Comment Written 19-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Thanks, Gert - I really appreciate your kind comments - and I'm so glad you know this great flower :-) Brooke
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You are welcome
Gert
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I liked this because your descriptions fit the chosen artwork so very well it is beautiful in an unusual way I enjoyed regards Fuller
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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I liked this because your descriptions fit the chosen artwork so very well it is beautiful in an unusual way I enjoyed regards Fuller
Comment Written 19-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2009
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Thank you, Fuller - you are most thoughtful :-) Brooke
Comment from mstad55
Bang! I could hear you thinking all the way across the state line. You shouldn't think outloud, people will start to suspect your lunacy isn't just about poetry and Haiku's but that it goes much deeper. You know what they say? One out of every three people is insane. If the person to the right of you seems normal and the person on the left seems normal too, that leaves you. Have a wonderfull night, I think that's all for me today. mstad55
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2009
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Bang! I could hear you thinking all the way across the state line. You shouldn't think outloud, people will start to suspect your lunacy isn't just about poetry and Haiku's but that it goes much deeper. You know what they say? One out of every three people is insane. If the person to the right of you seems normal and the person on the left seems normal too, that leaves you. Have a wonderfull night, I think that's all for me today. mstad55
Comment Written 18-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2009
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Oh, I figured out long ago I was one of the crazies :-) Why do you think I gravitate toward you with your singing, shoe loving characters? Thanks, Mike :-) Brooke
Comment from JessicaAshley
Beautifully done! I love haiku poetry and have always wanted to try it, but I know it can't be too easy to really send a message, make a description, etc. in such few words. Well, let me take that back, I know it wouldn't be easy for ME! Ha ha. Thanks so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2009
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Beautifully done! I love haiku poetry and have always wanted to try it, but I know it can't be too easy to really send a message, make a description, etc. in such few words. Well, let me take that back, I know it wouldn't be easy for ME! Ha ha. Thanks so much for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2009
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It is the hardest form of poetry I've ever written! Thanks so much :-) Brooke
