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Comment from Alexander E Poet
I like your style of writing a very fine write. Imagery; rhythm I really loved the realism and truth No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ...
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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I like your style of writing a very fine write. Imagery; rhythm I really loved the realism and truth No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander QQ...
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the positive review.
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from Carol Johnson
Wow. If you are going to sum up an individual in four lines I have to say this is a great job. So few words but say so much. WW II Vet, I can picture in my head. Umpire - that says "Dad" and baseball". Expediter - great word. And, of course, the final loving line.
Terrific job with so little to work with!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Wow. If you are going to sum up an individual in four lines I have to say this is a great job. So few words but say so much. WW II Vet, I can picture in my head. Umpire - that says "Dad" and baseball". Expediter - great word. And, of course, the final loving line.
Terrific job with so little to work with!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the positive review.
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from pixiemillie
A six-word tribute to a man special in your life. An excellent entry for the 6-word contest. Most Dads are to be admired, particularly those of the older generation who sacrificed so much for family. thank you and good luck
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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A six-word tribute to a man special in your life. An excellent entry for the 6-word contest. Most Dads are to be admired, particularly those of the older generation who sacrificed so much for family. thank you and good luck
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from wordstuff
This is good ... brief but good. In that sense there isn't much to change. The second line/word "Expiditer" should be "Expediter" I believe this is what you intended. wordstuff
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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This is good ... brief but good. In that sense there isn't much to change. The second line/word "Expiditer" should be "Expediter" I believe this is what you intended. wordstuff
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the review and feedback.
Comment from Writer191
A good six words to sum up love. I think you should win, but then I am a little biased, lol. Good luck with the contest. Jim :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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A good six words to sum up love. I think you should win, but then I am a little biased, lol. Good luck with the contest. Jim :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Thanks for the review and the vote of confidence.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Always love the six-word story competition. It's fun trying to find enough words to fit the requirements so the review is longer than the write. This is excellent. Good luck in the competition. Ray.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Always love the six-word story competition. It's fun trying to find enough words to fit the requirements so the review is longer than the write. This is excellent. Good luck in the competition. Ray.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009
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Thank you for the positive review.
