Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
Something to make you smile50 total reviews
Comment from El.Marjie
I loved your Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious acrostic. Good job. It must have taken you awhile. Congratulations on winning the contest and receiving two recognition seals. I just joined FanStory around the first of the year, and am just beginning to understand how the site works. I have several recognized works now. Thanks for entertaining me for awhile this afternoon. Marjie
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I loved your Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious acrostic. Good job. It must have taken you awhile. Congratulations on winning the contest and receiving two recognition seals. I just joined FanStory around the first of the year, and am just beginning to understand how the site works. I have several recognized works now. Thanks for entertaining me for awhile this afternoon. Marjie
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
Comment from Telperion
Oh my God! Great work here!
I am a fan of small, simple, meaningful poems. But you managed to do a huge one, funny, deep, ehh... Good job!
I did an acrostic of myself, but heh, it's quite the contrary of yours - try my NOOB acrostic. You'll enjoy the difference! :)
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Oh my God! Great work here!
I am a fan of small, simple, meaningful poems. But you managed to do a huge one, funny, deep, ehh... Good job!
I did an acrostic of myself, but heh, it's quite the contrary of yours - try my NOOB acrostic. You'll enjoy the difference! :)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2009
Comment from Xylok
lol, this is awesome too. you have such a rich vocabulary helping you convey such interesting and creative concepts. your mind is amazing. in the line preceding the poem you might want to change it to "too big for its britches" instead of "to big..."
you even keep meter with it. well done.
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lol, this is awesome too. you have such a rich vocabulary helping you convey such interesting and creative concepts. your mind is amazing. in the line preceding the poem you might want to change it to "too big for its britches" instead of "to big..."
you even keep meter with it. well done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2009
Comment from joelh605
OK you've won a contest, but I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Not only is this nicely metrical - something a lot of poets overlook when doing an acrostic, not to mention rhyming nicely, when you get to the last line the source of the meter becomes clear.
I'm putting on an extra hat, to take off to you.
Gil
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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OK you've won a contest, but I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Not only is this nicely metrical - something a lot of poets overlook when doing an acrostic, not to mention rhyming nicely, when you get to the last line the source of the meter becomes clear.
I'm putting on an extra hat, to take off to you.
Gil
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
WOW! Thank you Gil,
I am defintley honored by your incredible review. I didn't even know if it was possible to complete such a poem, but I'm definately glad I did. Everyone seems ro have enjoyed this so much it's brought me a lot of smiles (and I hope just as much to the readers) Thank you so much for the six star rating. Helvi :o)
Comment from summerhawk
This is the absolute best poem that I've read so far. There's not much left to say in order for this message to get to you. Yours definantly got to me.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2009
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This is the absolute best poem that I've read so far. There's not much left to say in order for this message to get to you. Yours definantly got to me.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2009
Thank you so much!
I wasn't sure when I started this poem if I could finish it,but I managed somehow. I appreciate the six stars very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
Comment from margyl
Wow! you did great! You pulled it off and very well at that. Also, you did entertain the reader really well. Thanks and congratulations you certainly deserved this win and my measly six stars!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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Wow! you did great! You pulled it off and very well at that. Also, you did entertain the reader really well. Thanks and congratulations you certainly deserved this win and my measly six stars!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
Hi margyl,
Sorry this is coming to you so late.
I think your six star rating for "Supercaligragalistic" is absolutely wonderful. Thank you so much. I'm glad you were entertained and enjoyed the poem so much. I am also honored for the six stars you gave me. I didn't even know if I could do this, but I'm so glad I did. Thanks for taking the time to read.
Hugs and Smiles,
Helvi :o)
Comment from Diny
BRAVO!- so well deserved win!- WOW that was very impressive I almost was singing the song- except I couldn't make out a chorus- haha WOW congrats!- Diny
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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BRAVO!- so well deserved win!- WOW that was very impressive I almost was singing the song- except I couldn't make out a chorus- haha WOW congrats!- Diny
Comment Written 28-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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Hi Diny, I think your six star rating for my poem is "Supercaligragalistic.." Someone actually told me they did sing the poem, so I loved your comment about trying to do the same. Your congrats for the acrostic win is very much appreciated. I hope you had a lot of fun reading this poem. Thanks for the high complemnts, I am honored to receive them. Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Helvi. How did I miss this one? Now I have to review it for 2 cents lol. This is superb. Funny, well written and so challenging. Very well done on your first place!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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Hi Helvi. How did I miss this one? Now I have to review it for 2 cents lol. This is superb. Funny, well written and so challenging. Very well done on your first place!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2009
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Hi my friend, I hope you got your two cents worth. Thank you for the wonderful review and six star rating .I hope you got a lot of smiles from this. I as always am honored to receive such kind words from you. Thank you so much! Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
Comment from JustJenny12345
LOL, even thought this is obviously one you did a while back, I just had to comment and say WOW, what a fantastic job and sooooooooooo funny!! I'm glad you won the contest, you deserved to! *walks off humming* ...Um diddily um diddily um diddily aye ...
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LOL, even thought this is obviously one you did a while back, I just had to comment and say WOW, what a fantastic job and sooooooooooo funny!! I'm glad you won the contest, you deserved to! *walks off humming* ...Um diddily um diddily um diddily aye ...
Comment Written 26-Jun-2009
Comment from cherry_rose
That's a super long word to do an acrostic for, but you did it and did it well. I like the way you managed to keep your train of thought logical and in good sequence. This was a lot of fun to read.
cherry_
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That's a super long word to do an acrostic for, but you did it and did it well. I like the way you managed to keep your train of thought logical and in good sequence. This was a lot of fun to read.
cherry_
Comment Written 25-Jun-2009
