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Freedom

A humorous septolet

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Comment from jkhudson
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Ew ew ew! Yuck as well! This was such a delightful read and in such a few sentences drew out a revulsion that I think effects everyone, but it still made me smile! HA! Go figure. ~:O) J

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
    Jules, thanks for your fun response to my silly poem :-) Brooke :-)
Comment from ersorenson
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It's nice you did that, but I like the reflective nature of your poems. It is one thing that draws me to your writing; there is always a message for the reader to ponder.

Eric

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2009
    Thanks, Eric - this was just a day off for silliness :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
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OK I know you can have fun and this poem shows it. I love the liberated worm bit. Great silly fun, love the choice of artwork. Cheers Gaye

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2009
    Gaye, thanks so much. It's fun to be silly once in a while. Brooke :-)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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I had to laugh at this one how many times does this happen very well done and beautifully presented as always regards Fuller

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2009
    Thanks so much, Fuller :-) Brooke
Comment from AlvinTEthington
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Quite a silly poem, but fun for those who appreciate this kind of humor (I would not want to find a worm in an apple I was eating.) You do contrast the two parts of the septolet well. Good alliteration in last line and good juxtaposition of picture and poem.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2009
    Alvin, I don't think I've met a living soul who would want to find that worm! LOL Thanks, Brooke :-)
Comment from MercyWrites
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Yikes. I love the poem it creates an image in my mind which intensified when you add the part about the worms. LOL, I wasn't expecting that, and I like the humor in the poem.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009
    So glad you like the humor in my little offering. Thank you!! Brooke :-)
Comment from Allmine
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Ewww...hahaha. Now if it had been in tequila, oh wait that is something else. You have such a talent for taking any subject and writing a few words and letting us readers feel everything. Such a great joy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009
    Thank you - I don't drink, so I need to ask a naive question - is there really a worm in the drink? :-) Brooke
reply by Allmine on 10-Jun-2009
    Only deep in Mexico with traditional tequila. Supposedly you get more drunk off of eating the worm. Personally, I say yuck
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009
    that is totally disgusting!
reply by Allmine on 10-Jun-2009
    I KNOW!!!!
Comment from sueseagull
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Ah, this is delightful! You were able to choose just the perfect words and fit it with good rhythm. Yhis is a very enjoyable read.
SUE

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009
    Sue, glad you liked my little trip to silly land :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from malachi1206
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I enjoyed this and the picture is so vivid for anyone who has seen this LOL a good cheery poem I have never thought your poems dark they were reflective and that can give the appearance of being dark I would say I have written poetry on the darkside but little known is I expect better of us anyway loved the poem malachi1206

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments - I appreciate your encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
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Oh ewwwww..... yuck. Well, Brooke, at least he wriggled out, hopefully intact...
I cannot write much more as this poem brought back memories of biting into a buggy chocolate bar as a child...eww eww.....
Hey, creative poem, vivid imagery...
Thanks (I think) for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009
    Oh, a candy bar??? How horrid! thank you, Nadine. Brooke :-)