Comment from babylonia

Excellent

LOL made me smile and giggle. nothing like the gift the gives more than you want. easy to read and follow. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2009

Thanks, Barbara (& sorry it took so long for me to reply!)

reply by babylonia on 02-Oct-2009

no worries. LOL look how long it took me to read it. :P
love,
barbara
sometimes we do have lives outside of fanstory, ain't it great?

Comment from olliebuster

Excellent

Very practical. I'm sure it revives memories of yesteryear, not only for you , but for me too. I also think that the artwork is great. Ollie

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009

Thanks, Ollie, it did. Appreciate the comments, MM

reply by olliebuster on 17-Jun-2009

You're welcome. Ollie

reply by olliebuster on 17-Jun-2009

You're very welcome. Ollie

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

This is hilarious!! (And very sad - in a funny way.)

I love this entry! The artwork is fun and the six-words are witty.

Great job, Mortman. LOL Sorry about the garlic and mono part. Hee hee.
Nic

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009

Thanks, Nic. It was no fun, but at least it makes for a good laugh now. Cheers, MM.

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

umm....
ew :-P
that was a little too much information LOL!
but still a great entry into the contest and excellent addition to the book!
thank you for sharing and good luck! :-)

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2009

No worries, and thanks for the kind words.

Comment from Thesis

Good

Ooh, ok, That was pretty gross.

However, it did qualify as a six word story. The sequence is a bit nauseating.

It was good, but that's all I can say. - Thesis

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009

Well, that was the reaction I was hoping for, plus I did hope people might find it a little bit amusing. I am guessing that you did not, based on your rating, but each to his own. Cheers, MM.

Comment from Amicus

Excellent

mortman, I enjoyed reading your six word story. It tells a whole story but one that leaves much room for the imagination to play...who are these kissers? How old? Garlic?...where was big sister or brother to warn them...or was the kiss totally unanticipated? And mono...who had it? who got it? How will I fill in the rest of the story so it satisfies me?

Fun stuff to play with. Nice job.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2009

OK, now that I don't have the restraints of six words: I took a family friend to the formal (Aussie equivalent of prom) who I'd been keen on for some time. I wasn't expecting much so was understandably thrilled to get a first kiss. Less thrilling was the taste which also included cheap wine and something akin to thick glue. As for the mono, I was the recipient and amongst other symptoms, I had the sorest throat I've ever had in my life! You have to be careful what you wish for.

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

Very funny and entertaining to read loved every word of your poetry. Great job with everything absolutely loved how you put this piece together.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2009

Thanks bozroz, glad you liked it. I wanted to include the taste of cheap wine, but didn't have enough words.