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Comment from babylonia
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shelley,
yeah, i feel the same way. i did not see that one coming. oy vey! easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. you followed the challenge well.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2009
    LOL! thanx so much! :)
reply by babylonia on 04-Jun-2009
    you are welcome~
Comment from mmichelle97219
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If you did know what would happen what would you hav done differently? Its a hard one to decide when you factor in everything. I thought it was a good little poem, shelley.

Michelle

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2009
    true - if i hadn't have married - i wouldn't have ashelei :-)
Comment from Deejharrington
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It sounds like an interesting beginning. It was an unusual phrase "heart devastating", but perfectly clear to understand. Will you know have to write the rest of the story? Or is that another part of the contest?
DJ

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2009
    it could either be a story or a poem :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello shelley sounds like you had a bad experience.
It shows in your poem very clearly in just a few angry words.
Good entry
Gert


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2009

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2009
    thank you much :)
reply by Gert sherwood on 04-Jun-2009
    TAKE CARE
    Gert