rispettos
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Comment from The Cowboy Poet
Small events can inspire great moments for a writer who is attuned to things around her. A poet's senses are very keen. An excellent observation and even more excellent rendition of what you witnessed.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2009
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Small events can inspire great moments for a writer who is attuned to things around her. A poet's senses are very keen. An excellent observation and even more excellent rendition of what you witnessed.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2009
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Thank you so much, Roger :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke It amazes me all the different forms of poetry there are. Your did this one very well. I often think I'd like to be an artist when I look at the way the light plays on mountains and dales. Instead I have my camera handy. By the way us dance teachers talk about light and shade with tap dancing! Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Hi Brooke It amazes me all the different forms of poetry there are. Your did this one very well. I often think I'd like to be an artist when I look at the way the light plays on mountains and dales. Instead I have my camera handy. By the way us dance teachers talk about light and shade with tap dancing! Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 06-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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My husband was a photographer - light and shade are extremely important to them! Light and shade in tap dancing - I like that. Thank you, Gaye. Brooke :-)
Comment from steevie
to me the poem is about new beginnings
each day comes and we make what we can of it, whether it be a good day or not so good a day
but we can glean from each day something positive if we look
I'm not sure if this was what you were looking for in your poem as far as interpretation, but that how I saw your poem
I hope my explanation doesn't disappoint you
take care
steve
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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to me the poem is about new beginnings
each day comes and we make what we can of it, whether it be a good day or not so good a day
but we can glean from each day something positive if we look
I'm not sure if this was what you were looking for in your poem as far as interpretation, but that how I saw your poem
I hope my explanation doesn't disappoint you
take care
steve
Comment Written 06-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Your interpretation is spot on, not disappointing at all - thank you, Steve :-) Brooke
Comment from frelanz
Beautiful poem and an awesome photo to go with it...
Sometimes shorter poems can hold more impact than longer ones!!!
I enjoyed reading this and may now have to visit your site and read more!!!
Dawn
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Beautiful poem and an awesome photo to go with it...
Sometimes shorter poems can hold more impact than longer ones!!!
I enjoyed reading this and may now have to visit your site and read more!!!
Dawn
Comment Written 06-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Dawn, thank you for such a lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from vtmom13
Oh wonderful...you are so very talented. This poem captured so perfectly what I love about early spring and late winter. I am also a photographer and the play of light you talk about in this poem is dream to all picture takers. The poem sounds lovely when read out loud, and it's rhyming scheme is smooth.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Oh wonderful...you are so very talented. This poem captured so perfectly what I love about early spring and late winter. I am also a photographer and the play of light you talk about in this poem is dream to all picture takers. The poem sounds lovely when read out loud, and it's rhyming scheme is smooth.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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My husband was a photographer and I was often with him as he looked for the perfect light :-) Thanks so much for your most generous and encouraging review. Do you post pictures on fan art?? Brooke :-)
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I just started to place a few photos on the sister site. I'm going to put a couple more up over the next few days.
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same screen name???
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gettysburg cannon and the motorcycle at the diner - great pics - I look forward to more, hopefully one that works with a poem of mine :-)
Comment from findingmyroom
Hi, Brook,
I love when a moment presents itself and inspiration strikes. This first attempt at a new form has a unique subject which makes it fresh; my favorite phrase is "design has come undone." In reading your piece, I find that the word "clouds" wants to be emphasized...what do you think?
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Hi, Brook,
I love when a moment presents itself and inspiration strikes. This first attempt at a new form has a unique subject which makes it fresh; my favorite phrase is "design has come undone." In reading your piece, I find that the word "clouds" wants to be emphasized...what do you think?
Comment Written 06-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2009
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Thank you. I'm not sure what you mean by the question. :-) Do you mean emphasized as in accented or as in as a subject?
Brooke
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Accented. It just seems like "clouds" is said with emphasis.
Stephanie
Comment from tonydem
Now the rispetto form will admire you. This is very easy reading with a fluid flow to it. Nothing to stumble over while reading and enjoying. Another beautiful poem to your credit, my dear.
Tony
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Now the rispetto form will admire you. This is very easy reading with a fluid flow to it. Nothing to stumble over while reading and enjoying. Another beautiful poem to your credit, my dear.
Tony
Comment Written 05-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Thank you, Tony - and good evening :-) Brooke
Comment from jdrhye
Lovely visual eye candy is what you have provided in this short and beautifully written piece. Metaphorically I can see the association of life's ups and downs interweaving every experience essential to a new and bright beginning. Life never without change a necessary part of living and gaining perspective. Thank you for sharing, lovely.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Lovely visual eye candy is what you have provided in this short and beautifully written piece. Metaphorically I can see the association of life's ups and downs interweaving every experience essential to a new and bright beginning. Life never without change a necessary part of living and gaining perspective. Thank you for sharing, lovely.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Visual eye candy - I like that!!! :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from MJMuraco
Brooke, you can write in so many different types of poetry and I commend you for that. This poem is lovely and simple and just so beautiful. I don't have enough knowledge of poetry to try so many different forms. You are a pro.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Brooke, you can write in so many different types of poetry and I commend you for that. This poem is lovely and simple and just so beautiful. I don't have enough knowledge of poetry to try so many different forms. You are a pro.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Mary Jayne, thank you. Each time I try a new form it is a leap of faith. Heck, if one doesn't work out, it just ain't a tragedy! LOL Brooke :-)
Comment from Robbi Kayser-Stange
Nicely done. I could see the play of sunlight, the green, both the dark and the bright. Thanks for sharing the view from your window with me.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Nicely done. I could see the play of sunlight, the green, both the dark and the bright. Thanks for sharing the view from your window with me.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Robbi, thank you, I appreciate your comments. Brooke :-)
