Foreshadowing
A Reflective Septolet80 total reviews
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke Your septolet has a depth of meaning in it. Very appropiate artwork. Everyone can help in some small way. I always say 'there but for the grace of God go I' LOL Gaye
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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Hi Brooke Your septolet has a depth of meaning in it. Very appropiate artwork. Everyone can help in some small way. I always say 'there but for the grace of God go I' LOL Gaye
Comment Written 05-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2009
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I appreciate your thoughtful reviews this evening, Gaye! Brooke
Comment from Lyrical_CD
Wow...that stinks huh? Interesting turn of events with this one. Like it possible that the rejection turns full cycle. Good write.
Cory
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Wow...that stinks huh? Interesting turn of events with this one. Like it possible that the rejection turns full cycle. Good write.
Cory
Comment Written 03-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks, Cory - for all your great reviews this afternoon :-) Brooke
Comment from perunest
A timely message, indeed. Any of us may
be only a paycheck away from being in dire
straits. As always, your poem is a cogent
reminder that the future can change in a heartbeat.
Carolyn
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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A timely message, indeed. Any of us may
be only a paycheck away from being in dire
straits. As always, your poem is a cogent
reminder that the future can change in a heartbeat.
Carolyn
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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Thanks, Carolyn :-) Brooke
Comment from sharon fallis
A wonderful depiction of what being poor can be and feel like. Very well thought out and portrayed. You have used good word choices and usage. Your subject is one that could draw out poems from now until forever. Thanks for sharing. Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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A wonderful depiction of what being poor can be and feel like. Very well thought out and portrayed. You have used good word choices and usage. Your subject is one that could draw out poems from now until forever. Thanks for sharing. Sharon
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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Sharon, thank you - I appreciate all your visits and reviews this morning :-) Brooke
Comment from NightWriter
The reflective septolet poem titled "Foreshadowing" is another classic of our time. It's a sad statement of people, and scary as this can happen to anyone.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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The reflective septolet poem titled "Foreshadowing" is another classic of our time. It's a sad statement of people, and scary as this can happen to anyone.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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I appreciate your visits and comments, Brooke
Comment from MJMuraco
Your poem is well written and makes a strong social comment. Yes, who knows with the way the economy is going, if any of us could end up homeless and poor. Always have compassion for those less fortunate because what goes around comes around.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Your poem is well written and makes a strong social comment. Yes, who knows with the way the economy is going, if any of us could end up homeless and poor. Always have compassion for those less fortunate because what goes around comes around.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you for so many great reviews in one evening!! Brooke
Comment from Annmuma
I have been out-of-pocket for several days, so I'm just now getting to my reviewing!! Great poem that says so much about our changing society today and the economic conditions. ann
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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I have been out-of-pocket for several days, so I'm just now getting to my reviewing!! Great poem that says so much about our changing society today and the economic conditions. ann
Comment Written 01-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thank you, Ann - I appreciate your visits and comments - always!! Brooke
Comment from Rabianabian
Another good poem. I'm not sure what to say--but I like that first line, it's very descriptive for such a short phrase. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Another good poem. I'm not sure what to say--but I like that first line, it's very descriptive for such a short phrase. Excellent job.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Thanks for all these thoughtful reviews this afternoon, Mary :-)
Comment from rmdelta
Brooke,
you do a tremendous job, my friend. I could say a lot of things to you about this one, but I won't. This was a strong poem, (whatever kind it is) and the meaning is clear. Well done
Reggie
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Brooke,
you do a tremendous job, my friend. I could say a lot of things to you about this one, but I won't. This was a strong poem, (whatever kind it is) and the meaning is clear. Well done
Reggie
Comment Written 01-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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Reggie, thank you for this positive review of my septolet. :-) Brooke
Comment from Nicnac
Oh my! This is sad and very timely. Times are hard. There are so many in situations they never saw coming!
Your septolet has a wonderful pause. It shines a light on a dark reality for so many in these hard economic times.
The statement 'rolls window up' is heartbreaking - although, sadly, I've been known to do that. :(
Nic
reply by the author on 31-May-2009
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Oh my! This is sad and very timely. Times are hard. There are so many in situations they never saw coming!
Your septolet has a wonderful pause. It shines a light on a dark reality for so many in these hard economic times.
The statement 'rolls window up' is heartbreaking - although, sadly, I've been known to do that. :(
Nic
Comment Written 31-May-2009
reply by the author on 31-May-2009
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Nic, thank you. Sadness is in the air. Brooke
