Bucket, or How Best to Butter Butts
A silly song, for fun and contests13 total reviews
Comment from Nicnac
GIGGLE GIGGLE
This is funny.
I guess the butt butter has other uses than for just diaper rash. LOL
You've written a fun and witty jingle, Mike. Nice job.
Thanks for the chuckles.
Nic
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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GIGGLE GIGGLE
This is funny.
I guess the butt butter has other uses than for just diaper rash. LOL
You've written a fun and witty jingle, Mike. Nice job.
Thanks for the chuckles.
Nic
Comment Written 31-May-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2009
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I aim to cause chuckles, and yes, it sounds far ruder than the contest stipulates :-). I'm sure that was intentional on the organiser's part (unless they're very innocent indeed!), so I tried to imply a little extra rudeness with my effort ;-)
Thank you for the review; glad you enjoyed!
Mike
Comment from pilarblue
Yours really read like a commercial. I could hear everything and the Jingle Bell tune in the background as well. I love the very fast talking voice with the warnings, hilarious!! Super job. :D
reply by the author on 30-May-2009
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Yours really read like a commercial. I could hear everything and the Jingle Bell tune in the background as well. I love the very fast talking voice with the warnings, hilarious!! Super job. :D
Comment Written 30-May-2009
reply by the author on 30-May-2009
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Lol, thank you pilarblue :-) I had a great time scribbling this one out. Glad I raised a laugh ;-)
Mike
Comment from filmoreodragon
LOL. Ok now I'm scared to read what you will write next! You are either a genius or insane. My suspicions are that both are correct. (I can forgive both since you like cats.)This is excellent, hilarious, and I especially love the fast talking warnings at the end. How do you come up with this stuff?!
reply by the author on 30-May-2009
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LOL. Ok now I'm scared to read what you will write next! You are either a genius or insane. My suspicions are that both are correct. (I can forgive both since you like cats.)This is excellent, hilarious, and I especially love the fast talking warnings at the end. How do you come up with this stuff?!
Comment Written 29-May-2009
reply by the author on 30-May-2009
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The cats keep me insane; they know when I'm veering towards normal, and keep me on the wide and wobbly with their claws and looks that say "silly human".
This contest was great fun to write for, and I always laugh at the end of radio adverts when they have the ridiculously fast-talking person telling you that everything you've just heard is basically bullshit. I couldn;t resist!
Mike
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LOL Well said. Definitely bull shit and they even say so!
Comment from adewpearl
Well, other than offering the vocal/audio component where a children's chorus actually performs, you have provided the entire commercial here- you may well have a new career. LOL
This is so funny. A delightful entry into this cute contest.
Brooke
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Well, other than offering the vocal/audio component where a children's chorus actually performs, you have provided the entire commercial here- you may well have a new career. LOL
This is so funny. A delightful entry into this cute contest.
Brooke
Comment Written 29-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Thank you Brooke :-). And I almost managed to keep it not-too-rude! But not quite ;-)
Mike
Comment from Tellis
Oh my, this is such a funny jingle! I loved the chorus and the end part was a riot. Ienjoyed this well written piece.
Tellis
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Oh my, this is such a funny jingle! I loved the chorus and the end part was a riot. Ienjoyed this well written piece.
Tellis
Comment Written 28-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Thanks Tellis :-). I had a great time writing this piece!
Mike
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Mike it looked like you had a great fun time writing this one. Lot's of guidelines and you kept them all. Would love to see it do well in the contest, good luck. Loyd
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Mike it looked like you had a great fun time writing this one. Lot's of guidelines and you kept them all. Would love to see it do well in the contest, good luck. Loyd
Comment Written 28-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Hi Loyd, and thank you for the review! Yes, this was a lot of fun to come up with, and it had been a while since I wrote a funny one :-)
Mike
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A good Friday morning to you poet friend Mike
You arre very welcome
Have a wonderful day!
Loyd
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A good Friday morning to you poet friend Mike
You arre very welcome
Have a wonderful day!
Loyd
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A good Friday morning to you poet friend Mike
You arre very welcome
Have a wonderful day!
Loyd
Comment from Hitcher
Why Am I not surprised that you would join a contest like this one MIKE...Dr Smoothie's Butt Butter!
There was no way you were going to pass up the chance of having a go of this one was there mate, ha ha. Brilliant, better not let my girls hear me singing it they might get into trouble at school if they repeat it, ha ha. Well done you nutcase, loved it.
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Why Am I not surprised that you would join a contest like this one MIKE...Dr Smoothie's Butt Butter!
There was no way you were going to pass up the chance of having a go of this one was there mate, ha ha. Brilliant, better not let my girls hear me singing it they might get into trouble at school if they repeat it, ha ha. Well done you nutcase, loved it.
Comment Written 28-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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It took all my willpower not to make this the most filthy advert jingle ever written :-). It certainly sounds like something far more internet-worthy than a nappy rash ointment! Great fun to write. Glad I gave you a laugh mate; I needed to write something funny, as it's been a little while :-)
Mike
Comment from babylonia
mike,
i love it. this is hilarious. had me giggling from the very start. i had to sing the whole thing. usually when i read something it will say chorus and i say i already read it. not with this one. smile and giggle. definitely good. i hope you do well in the contest.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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mike,
i love it. this is hilarious. had me giggling from the very start. i had to sing the whole thing. usually when i read something it will say chorus and i say i already read it. not with this one. smile and giggle. definitely good. i hope you do well in the contest.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 28-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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lol, thank you Barbara :-). I admit, I was giggling when I wrote it. I know I shouldn't laugh at my own jokes, but when I typed 'arse marg' in the notes I nearly wet myself. Ah, how the bottom does amuse us Brits ...
Thank you for the great rating, Barbara :-). I was really hankering to write a funny piece, as I'd been quite serious recently, so this was great.
Mike
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mike,
LOL i always laugh at my own stuff. then i always hope that others will as well. i grew up listening to butt humor. fart jokes, etc. potty humor.
:P
yeah, sometimes you have to take a break from serious stuff or you start to take life that way. gets to me every time.
gotta lighten up once in a while. glad you wrote this one.
love,
barbara
Comment from Annelisa
I am still laughing! I so needed a laugh today. I'm glad you decided to give this contest a try. I don't even know how to pick out a favorite line...Well doneand thanks for the laugh. Annelisa
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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I am still laughing! I so needed a laugh today. I'm glad you decided to give this contest a try. I don't even know how to pick out a favorite line...Well doneand thanks for the laugh. Annelisa
Comment Written 28-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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Hi Annelisa :-). I had a whale of a time writing this one, so I'm glad to hear it's making people laugh; I find comedy is one of those things that's so subjective, it can be hard to know if you're being funny or not!
Mike
Comment from Sasha
I guess I am just a guttless wonder...when I saw this contest I immediately told myself you couldn't pay me enough to try this one. But I must admit I have read some very clever entries. I like yours very much. Clever and the added bonus of the second definition of butty only adds to the humor. Nice job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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I guess I am just a guttless wonder...when I saw this contest I immediately told myself you couldn't pay me enough to try this one. But I must admit I have read some very clever entries. I like yours very much. Clever and the added bonus of the second definition of butty only adds to the humor. Nice job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-May-2009
reply by the author on 29-May-2009
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I spent a while trying to come up with alternative interpretations of butt butter, and only got as far as the ram that butts intruders to his field on the behind as they run, and a butt butty, but they were enough to carry the jingle (just, I think!). This was great fun, and yes, there are some great entries (I'm just reading the others now; I try to avoid reading the other entries in a contest I've entered before I write mine, in case I get influenced or put off :-)
Mike
