The Listener
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Alone again, naturally"Telepathy makes business trust easy. Or should.
4 total reviews
Comment from worldofwordcraft
Fast pace, realistic dialogue, plenty of tension, and a sci-fi concept (telepathy). As an SF fan, I couldn't ask for more. As always, I look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 23-May-2009
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Fast pace, realistic dialogue, plenty of tension, and a sci-fi concept (telepathy). As an SF fan, I couldn't ask for more. As always, I look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-May-2009
reply by the author on 23-May-2009
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You're very knid, thank you
Comment from WRITER1
Another good installment of The Listener. I enjoyed this I was wondering when those two would finally show their true colors. It seemed Laura finally found a real friend in Judy.
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Another good installment of The Listener. I enjoyed this I was wondering when those two would finally show their true colors. It seemed Laura finally found a real friend in Judy.
Comment Written 22-May-2009
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Maybe. Maybe not 8^) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks
Comment from Adri7enne
Oh, one of my favorite songs. "Alone again, naturally".
Yes, I like that the women are strong enough to make the guys cower. For some reason, I'm not really trusting Judy.
Great dialogue, nice smooth delivery. Still intrigued by your story, still enjoying it. Good job, snod.
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Oh, one of my favorite songs. "Alone again, naturally".
Yes, I like that the women are strong enough to make the guys cower. For some reason, I'm not really trusting Judy.
Great dialogue, nice smooth delivery. Still intrigued by your story, still enjoying it. Good job, snod.
Comment Written 22-May-2009
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Now I thought that song title would be too obscure for anybody. Thanks for the review. Glad I'm still holding your attention.
Comment from Darren Crozier
Lol I don't know what I loved more the story or your bio ha ha ,
Well, My names darren, and i live on that little theme park of the coast of the uk lol ( the isle of man) :0
I am also a bike fan, and own a Tw going in for my test soon to mate :)
I really like your writing style, its somewhat of a breath of fresh air to tell you the truth!
One more note before i go tho mate,
I noticed you have been writing alot longer than me, and i'd love it if you ( if you get the time of course) if you could maybe look at or review a few pieces of my work, I know its alot to ask mate but i think i could learn alot from you :)
Thanks buddy and congratulations once again on another superb piece of writing.Your jnew friend Daz :)
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Lol I don't know what I loved more the story or your bio ha ha ,
Well, My names darren, and i live on that little theme park of the coast of the uk lol ( the isle of man) :0
I am also a bike fan, and own a Tw going in for my test soon to mate :)
I really like your writing style, its somewhat of a breath of fresh air to tell you the truth!
One more note before i go tho mate,
I noticed you have been writing alot longer than me, and i'd love it if you ( if you get the time of course) if you could maybe look at or review a few pieces of my work, I know its alot to ask mate but i think i could learn alot from you :)
Thanks buddy and congratulations once again on another superb piece of writing.Your jnew friend Daz :)
Comment Written 22-May-2009
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Well, after such flattery, what can I say? I'll check out your work, though it may be a day or two. be warned, though. I don't like to receive 2 line, "Well done" reviews, so the ones I leave are the sort I'd like to get. So I'll pull your baby to pieces. It's not that it's (necessarilly) bad, but I think writers know the good bits they write.
Anyway, thank you for your fulsome praise. Glad you liked it.
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Hell yeah!!!!!!! Kick my works ass! :)
Like i said if i can learn from you then teach me :0 ha ha
And thanks mate .Daz
