Comment from Peter@Poole

Excellent

This is a consummate septolet, Brooke, and a superb example of your poetic prowess. You have a way with words that few on this site can approach. Peter

 Comment Written 25-May-2009

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reply by the author on 25-May-2009

Peter, thank you. I always appreciate your visits and kind comments :-) Brooke

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

Hallelujah!

This septolet just oozes with joy. Although those left behind are heavyhearted, Sammy's spirit is not sad.

I am sorry you have lost your friend, Brooke, but I am glad you are rejoicing his life.

Blessings,
Nic

 Comment Written 25-May-2009

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reply by the author on 25-May-2009

Nic, thank you - you understand the spirit of this perfectly!! Brooke :-)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A funeral is not for morning the lost of someone, but to celebrate that person's life. Very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Charlie, that is what this funeral was like, too! Thanks, Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 24-May-2009

You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie

Comment from RADIO

Excellent

Once again you give us an interesting
life thought to reflect upon.
I wonder how many agree and how
many would totally disagree.
Sadly one of my sons does not
see the spirit resurrected.
Radio

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Radio, thank you - I know many don't agree, my own two adult children included - there's just not anything everyone will agree on :-) Brooke

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

Great job with the poetry. Sorry that it came out of a real life experience . But the poem was absouletly fabulous amazing job with everything . Amazingly crafted poem.

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Thanks so much, my friend. Brooke

Comment from Tellis

Excellent

This is a very true thought and this poem flows nicely.
I really enjoyed reading this well written piece of poetry.

Tellis

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Tellis, you are just making my morning!! Thank you again, Brooke :-)

Comment from Nescher Pyscher

Excellent

"Do not stand at my grave and weep. I did not die, I do not sleep."

Somebody.

A lovely piece, Brooke. I'll pray for you and yours.

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Mary Elizabeth Frye - I just looked it up. :-) Thanks, Nescher. Brooke

Comment from Gaye Hemsley

Excellent

Just lovely Brooke, your little poem says it all. The spirit of this caring man will live on. Remember Scotty with joy in your heart. LOL Gaye

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Thanks so much, Gaye - you are most thoughtful. Brooke :-)

Comment from Paradox Tremors

Excellent

I love this simple piece of writing, especially the second part. I believe what you have said. A week ago Saturday, we buried my brother-inlaw. He was a good man. His spirit now lives in the house of the Lord.

 Comment Written 24-May-2009

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reply by the author on 24-May-2009

Thank you, and I am so sorry for your family's loss. Brooke

Comment from steevie

Excellent

interesting poem
Things at times look so well on the exterior, but the interior often tells a different story
I really liked this poem, Brooke

good one!

steve

 Comment Written 23-May-2009

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reply by the author on 23-May-2009

Steve, thank you for another great review :-) Brooke

reply by steevie on 28-May-2009

you're welcome, Brooke

steve