The Baby Rash Cure
jingle contest entry19 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Clever...short to the point, but clever!
This was the first one that I read set to Itsy Bitsy Spider.
It put a smile on my face and I enjoyed your jingle.
Good job!
reply by the author on 26-May-2009
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Clever...short to the point, but clever!
This was the first one that I read set to Itsy Bitsy Spider.
It put a smile on my face and I enjoyed your jingle.
Good job!
Comment Written 26-May-2009
reply by the author on 26-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from oledihard
Crack-up poem. You really put out a great one. I have laughed so much I hurt. All are just great. Yours has the rhyme down pat and goes excellent with the tune. Have fun.
reply by the author on 26-May-2009
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Crack-up poem. You really put out a great one. I have laughed so much I hurt. All are just great. Yours has the rhyme down pat and goes excellent with the tune. Have fun.
Comment Written 26-May-2009
reply by the author on 26-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my jingle.
Comment from Nicnac
This is adorable.
You've written a fine jingle, Fayesh!
Sung aloud, your lyrics fit the song "Itsy, Bitsy" perfectly. The illustration you chose fits nicely too.
Great job. Best wishes on your entry.
Nic
reply by the author on 26-May-2009
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This is adorable.
You've written a fine jingle, Fayesh!
Sung aloud, your lyrics fit the song "Itsy, Bitsy" perfectly. The illustration you chose fits nicely too.
Great job. Best wishes on your entry.
Nic
Comment Written 25-May-2009
reply by the author on 26-May-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Marta-Magdalena
That was cute and wouldn't it be nice if someone actually used it? I haven't had to deal with baby rashes in years and years and I am oh,so glad about that. Kudos to you and your jingle.
reply by the author on 25-May-2009
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That was cute and wouldn't it be nice if someone actually used it? I haven't had to deal with baby rashes in years and years and I am oh,so glad about that. Kudos to you and your jingle.
Comment Written 24-May-2009
reply by the author on 25-May-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my jingle.
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I really did like it,it was cute and so were the babies.
Comment from sgalletti
Well...this was a lot of fun. Appears you followed all the guidelines well. Rhyming is great and it definitely looks and sounds like an ad. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Well...this was a lot of fun. Appears you followed all the guidelines well. Rhyming is great and it definitely looks and sounds like an ad. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2009
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Hammer1963
I have been reading dark romantic poems for the last hour and needed a smile. I am very curious about the 4 sizes line, thinking there must be a lot of need for butt butter across the nation.
Thanks for the laugh.
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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I have been reading dark romantic poems for the last hour and needed a smile. I am very curious about the 4 sizes line, thinking there must be a lot of need for butt butter across the nation.
Thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written 24-May-2009
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my jingle.
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Thank you for taking the time to review my jingle.
Comment from adewpearl
By gosh, I just sang it out loud and it fits the music perfectly! :-) I look and sound like an idiot, but who cares? :-D It sounds appropriate for television and radio to me and you include the pertinent information and it's darned cute - what more can one ask? oh yeah, and it rhymes! LOL
Brooke
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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By gosh, I just sang it out loud and it fits the music perfectly! :-) I look and sound like an idiot, but who cares? :-D It sounds appropriate for television and radio to me and you include the pertinent information and it's darned cute - what more can one ask? oh yeah, and it rhymes! LOL
Brooke
Comment Written 24-May-2009
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Thank you Brooke, for your wonderful review of my little jingle. I just hope that the product is fictitious and this contest wasn't a "cheap" way to get us to write a jingle for nothing. I want my lawyer!!!!
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Thank you Brooke, for your wonderful review of my little jingle. I just hope that the product is fictitious and this contest wasn't a "cheap" way to get us to write a jingle for nothing. I want my lawyer!!!!
Comment from MsRefusenik
Not bad--ready to be broadcast I think. It is very cute. I hope you do well in the contest. Maybe you've found a new career as a jingle writer. Look at the money Charlie Sheen makes as one on Two and A Half Men.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Not bad--ready to be broadcast I think. It is very cute. I hope you do well in the contest. Maybe you've found a new career as a jingle writer. Look at the money Charlie Sheen makes as one on Two and A Half Men.
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Comment Written 24-May-2009
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Thank you for the wodnerful review. I wouldn't mind a career writing jingles; the royalties are great.
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Thank you for the wonderful review. I wouldn't mind a career writing jingles; the royalties are great.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent, I sang this outloud and it fits the Itsy Bitsy Spider,I just left some children in the family and I wish I had this to sing. Great jingle and I would buy the product after if this were used in the commercial,good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Excellent, I sang this outloud and it fits the Itsy Bitsy Spider,I just left some children in the family and I wish I had this to sing. Great jingle and I would buy the product after if this were used in the commercial,good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 24-May-2009
reply by the author on 24-May-2009
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
