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Quaterns: Observations on Life

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Comment from babylonia
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brooke,
LOL in the barn, in the house and even in the yard. wherever life is ... there is god. nicely done. made me smile. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 22-May-2009


reply by the author on 22-May-2009
    Barbara, thank you!! :-) Brooke
reply by babylonia on 23-May-2009
    brooke,
    you are very welcome~
    love,
    barbara
Comment from Hitcher
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Not in my barn he doesn't![I haven't got one!] ha ha. You are so good at writing these reflective quaterns, one cannot help but have to open and read, this was fun, fresh and fab, very nice friend.

 Comment Written 20-May-2009


reply by the author on 20-May-2009
    Hitcher, with you we would ask if God resides in the bedroom! LOL Thank you, my friend. Brooke :-)
Comment from dtimes3
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Flows nicely and reads well. Great statement in simple terms of everday life.

++ "and life is lived in every way."

Great job Pearl!

 Comment Written 20-May-2009


reply by the author on 20-May-2009
    Thank you yet again :-) Brooke
Comment from Rottie
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How different is this? It's wonderful poem! HE resides every where for sure but you have brought the light in on every little movement "in the barn" as if to really say HE is indeed every where. I loved the simple unraveled flow of this. Great write!

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Thank you - I really appreciate your comments! Brooke :-)
Comment from luna
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I love it! Yes, God resides everywhere, especially right inside each and every one of us, I believe. I don't think that a church is "God's House" - I think "everywhere" is God's House! I reserve the right to talk to my God in her home on the moon!

Love,

Luna *smile*

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Jenny - I love your response - thank you!! Brooke :-)
Comment from sara-beth
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This is a great idea, kind of like a child's question to an older person......and the older person might say, "God is everywhere"...very well written and original!

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Sara-beth, thank you - I'm so glad you like this one :-) Brooke
Comment from bard owl
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What a nostalgic and gentle treat, this poem of God and the barn. You ask questions that make the images real in my mind. And my thought is that yes, God lives everywhere in all time frames and will forever. What blessed assurence your poem arouses. Excellent, as usual, Brooke. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Linda, thank you for your most thoughtful review and comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from raw form
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Yet another poem to make me think outside of my normal realm. God is everywhere or so I've been told I never doubt this because of the life I've lived. Your poem is almost musical as I read it I heard chimes...Yes I know I'm weird LOL but I always get a kick out of the words you use and how you put them together

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Thank you - I really appreciate everything you've said :-) Brooke
Comment from Eaglewolf
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Another wonderful title. I love the rhyme and rhythm in this one. Such good questions to muse on, and make one think. You've set a wonderful scene of a farm yard.

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Thank you - I'm glad you like this one. Brooke :-)
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
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I love it, a fun poem with a good feeling. I always learnt that God was everwhere so why not in the barn. A pretty picture to go with it. LOL Gaye

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 20-May-2009
    Gaye, thank you - that's what I say - why not? :-) Brooke