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The Listener

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Telepathy makes business trust easy. Or should.

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Comment from WRITER1
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She has her hands full with Christmas. This is a good chapter. Liked the way they interacted. You haven't written much on this story lately. Will look forward to next chapter.

 Comment Written 08-May-2009

reply by the author on 08-May-2009
    I've been stuck on a plot point, but I think I might be able to wriggle round it. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it
Comment from Adri7enne
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Christmas is turning into an interesting character. I love the tension between them. Great dialogue, here.
There's a new TV show starting within the next few weeks, called "The Listener", about a guy who reads minds. Are you involved in that?
Love your stuff.

 Comment Written 08-May-2009

reply by the author on 08-May-2009
    Gaaaahhh! I write a vampire book and Twilight comes out. I write a book called Listener ... I think my place is bugged.

    Yes, Christmas is developing. Must stop him turning into me, though. Thanks for the review
reply by Adri7enne on 08-May-2009
    Guess it's true that we all share one universal mind. Seems great scientific and medical breakthroughs also happen simultaneously in many cases. Who knows, uh?
Comment from lizziebach
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This is great, I just loved the exchanges between the two of them, hilarious. I would happily read more of you work. Your writing is concise, vivid and funny. Loved it! If only I had six stars!

 Comment Written 08-May-2009

reply by the author on 08-May-2009
    I shall take a moral six. Thank you for your review.