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The Milk Moon

reflective quatrains

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Comment from mstad55
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Gee, so much to learn from these cow tails. It's amazing what a full moon can do. It makes people crazy and it gives the cows milk. What next? Cinco DeMayo? Oh wait, that was four days before the full moon. I suppose we're glad we don't get milk from pigs. People would think that they would get the flu if the drank from the swine. mstad55

 Comment Written 11-May-2009

reply by the author on 12-May-2009
    Mike, thank you and good morning! Brooke Pig milk - it could open up whole new markets. LOL
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
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Hi Brooke Another lovely poem, it has a warm and cosy feeling. The rhyming and the artwork choice is just perfect. cheers Gaye

 Comment Written 08-May-2009

reply by the author on 08-May-2009
    Gaye, thank you and good morning!! Brooke :-)
Comment from mtngalofnc
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Hi Brooke,
I had not heard of the May moon so I have learned something new today. The art fits perfectly with your words. The scene is easily envisioned through your imagery. Good rhyme and flow. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc

 Comment Written 07-May-2009

reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Thank you - I always appreciate your visits and comments. God bless you, too :-) Brooke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
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Brooke, not only do I always enjoy your terrific poetry, I always learn something new as well. I had not heard the expression 'milk moon' but it's wonderful. I'm very fond of Guernsey cows too. They have gorgeous long eyelashes and are real beauties. I've actually seen them on the island of Guernsey - and eaten scones and cream from their milk! this poem is so evocative of this time of year. Beautifully written, as usual. a very enjoyable read.
Warmest wishes
Kat

 Comment Written 07-May-2009

reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Kat, thank you for your enjoyable comments - I love it when people share delightful experiences that connect to my poetry. Brooke :-)
Comment from chaswriter
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Brooke - I had never heard of the Milk Moon, and I have milked many cows. You are a font of knowledge. Great rhyme scheme and smooth flow in the narrative. Plus you paint an accurate image of the cows ruminating in the pasture. Well done. Charlie

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Charlie, google is a font of knowledge. I know just enough to know what to look up. LOL Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from fayesh
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Your rhymed verse was precise and flowed well. I like the way you associated the moon with the lushness of the month of May and the bountiful production the milk.

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Thanks so much, Brooke :-) Brooke
Comment from dportwood
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Perfect description of May pastures and the dairy scene. The farmer is relieved of some of the expense of feed because 'the Guernseys eat at will, and his bottom line is improved because he has 'pails that over spill'. But as a reviewer, it is my job to point out the flaws in this poem - There are none.
Duane

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Duane, you are a sweetheart. Thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from LynnRadford
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A beautiful tribute to the upcoming Milk Moon!
Your informative bits are nearly always as insightful as your poetry, Brooke.
Thanks for sharing!
L

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

reply by the author on 07-May-2009
    Lynn, thank you!! Brooke :-)
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
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::Grinning from ear to ear like a stoned chimp::

Brooke?

How do farmers "fill their barns with pails that spill" with milk?

I'm just asking . . .

;0)

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    Nescher, don't go all logical on me. You're not allowed. You're my friend, so just take my damned word for it!! LOL
    The buckets are simply really full before they pour them into whatever the hell they pour them into!!! LOL Brooke
Comment from EllieKaye
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I had no idea where the 'milk moon' idea came from. This is fun and a learning tool as well. I really enjoy your poems, and this is delightful.

I'm not reviewing more of yours though--not until I get back. I'm heading out of town for a week to help my daughter move out of her dorm. So have a Happy Mother's Day, my friend. :)

 Comment Written 06-May-2009

reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    Ellie, thank you - MOther's Day is also my birthday this year, so I appreciate the good wishes. Have a wonderful time with your daughter :-D Brooke
reply by EllieKaye on 06-May-2009
    HAPPY BIARTHDAY! How very fitting! Enjoy your day!

    I'm off--- :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2009
    :-)