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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Max Edon
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I thought that this poem was really sweet. I loved the picture that went with this. I know it is very hard to get your message across in only six words.

 Comment Written 05-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thank you Max. It is very hard. Hugs, Teri
reply by Max Edon on 06-May-2009
    You are welcome!
Comment from Bryana
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So short and yet so beautiful and meaningful. You don't need so many words to tell a loving story as you have about your mother. I also love the roses.

Have a wonderful day my friend,

 Comment Written 05-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thank you my friend. She is truly missed. Love, teri
Comment from Twomoon
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teri, a lovely verse for mom! This is so nice. I enjoy your touch of heart and appreciation of your world that carries into ours. Loved the art, a perfect choice. much love thanks for the tea, twomoon

 Comment Written 05-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    You are so welcome my sweet friend. Love, Teri
Comment from becky7777
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this is a great 6 word story. what a wonderful for a mother to teach her daughter. love the pic too. good luck in the contest.
hugs
Becky

 Comment Written 04-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thank you Becky. Happy Mothers Day to you! Love, Teri
Comment from empire76
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Nice. Very nice. Tells a whole lot about your mother and you and your belief. A complete story told in six words. Well done and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thank you my friend. She was a true angel on earth. Hugs, Teri
Comment from VICTIMEYES
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Loving mother, taught me about Jesus!
six word story it looks to be quite difficult to complete but i like the statement you make in yours.

 Comment Written 04-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thank you Kevin. I hope you are doing well. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Phil Kitom
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A simple message ably communicated by using only six words. A sad epitaph that is ably supported by strong and effective artwork

 Comment Written 04-May-2009


reply by the author on 04-May-2009
    Thank you. There is so much more about my mother I could have written. hugs, Teri
Comment from WRITER1
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It was extremely short, but to the point. You are a lucky that your mother had the insight to teach you about God. Our parents are our spiritual guides. Good job on this, and good luck on the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-May-2009


reply by the author on 04-May-2009
    Thank you for the great review. She did take me and my sister to Sunday School and taught us about Jesus. Hugs, Teri
Comment from nora arjuna
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oh i didn't expect to read a six-word story. i was looking forward to read a story about your mother. anyway, this was great. maybe more of a statement, but i wish you all the best.


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 Comment Written 04-May-2009


reply by the author on 04-May-2009
    Thank you my friend. My mother was so much more than six words worth. Love, Teri