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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from babylonia
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teri,
hope you are doing well. glad to see mom passed on the goodness to you and not the bad.
have a great one.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2009
    Thanks Barbara. Love, Teri
reply by babylonia on 12-Sep-2009
    teri,
    you are very welcome~
    love,
    barbara
Comment from EllieKaye
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Hi Teri,
These 6 word stories are fun. They take a lot of concentrating on using just the right words. I think you did a fine job.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2009
    Thank you my friend. Hugs,Teri
Comment from Justin Chopin
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That's the best one that I've heard yet. Great job with the poetry. Absolutely loved the power that this story had. Amazing.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2009
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from joan marie
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It is one of the most important thing a parent can pass on to a child. You were lucky. I remember going to church with the neighbors more than my parents. Great write. Good luck, jm

 Comment Written 20-May-2009


reply by the author on 21-May-2009
    Thank you my friend. My mother was great about taking us to church! Hugs, Teri
reply by joan marie on 21-May-2009
    You're welcome, jm
Comment from Rottie
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Okay, this is going to be hell to review! lol1 six words eh? Okay, great mother, taught you the one thing we should all learn from our first breath. Wonderful "story"!

 Comment Written 20-May-2009


reply by the author on 21-May-2009
    lol Thanks for the review. It is hard to review these! Hugs, Teri
Comment from Carol D Parker
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Lovely sentiment. Beautiful thought. Well written. Not much else to say about something so short. Good luck in the contest.
Delora

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from shelley kaye
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light
and sweet
with a nice memory
to hold within

good six-worder!

nothing to fix or change

thanx for sharing and good luck in contest! :)

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Thanks Shell.Hugs, Teri
Comment from Nicnac
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Hallelujah!

A godly mother is a wonderful thing. What a blessing to have a shining beacon to guide you in life. :)

This six-word story entry made me smile.
I was blessed in reading it.

Best wishes in the contest, Teri. This is beautiful.
Nic

 Comment Written 19-May-2009


reply by the author on 19-May-2009
    Thank you Nic. I miss my mom so much but she is in a much better place and one day I hope to see her again. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Soulester
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This is a sweet way to sum up your mother's guidance, Teri. The photo is beautiful, too. Good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 09-May-2009


reply by the author on 10-May-2009
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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Hi Teri this is a very well written micro story. It has a smooth flow of words making for a very easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 05-May-2009


reply by the author on 05-May-2009
    Thank you Charlie.Hugs, Teri
reply by c_lucas on 06-May-2009
    You're welcome, Teri. Charlie