Comment from rama devi

Excellent

A wonderful image, sweet and lovely. Good artwork to match the theme.

Simple and glowing.
I see no Spags

I wish you best of luck.

Warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2009

Glad you enjoyed it, rd. Appreciate your comments.. ;)sk

Comment from Domino

Excellent

Hi, Art, it's difficult to comment on just six words, so I've already taken up some space saying absolutely nothing. Some may say - "What's new?" ;-)
I never heard this saying, but it's terrific. Good luck n best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 02-May-2009

Thanks for the review, Ray. Sorry for the delay in response but.. ya know, better latent than never..;) The smell of mom's magic moondrops and envisioning her putting them on our (four kids) pillows at night time is strong after all these decades. We really did sleep well and had marvelous sweet dreams. Appreciate your commments.. ;) Art

Comment from Earthwriter

Excellent

very nice yes i believe that moondrops would be very soothing indeed and help you have beutiful slumbers excellent job my friend your six words is a definite mouthful

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 02-May-2009

thanks for the review, Monte. glad you liked this six-worder. .. appreciate your comments..;) sk

Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

Moondrops on pillows
guaranteed sweet dreams

hi starkat. your six-word story is poetic in a way. can be a poem too. i love the phrase - moondrops on pillows. good luck!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 02-May-2009

hi arjuna... glad you enjoyed this little six worder.. appreciate your review and comments..;) starkat

Comment from skye

Excellent

What a great contest entry... six words that tell a sweet and dreamy story.

Moondrops on pillows
guaranteed sweet dreams

Good luck in the contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 02-May-2009

Glad you liked this little six worder, skye. Appreciate your review.. ;)

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

The words you chose,paint a very tranquil picture of a lovely place to be.

Totally relaxed, withoiut a care in the world, in dreamland. - Thesis

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 02-May-2009

Thanks for the review, Thesis. Appreciate your review and comments.. ;) starkat

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Nice words and they do convey a complete story. I guess a mother could confort her child by creating an image of moondrops on pillows that would guarantee that child a restful nights sleep. Good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 02-May-2009

Thanks for the review, Beth. My mom had some special perfume she called 'moondrops' and she put drops of it on our (four kids) pillows at night sometimes to get us to go to bed. I still remember the smell of those moondrops after decades, and also remember how well they worked. We really did have wonderful, sweet dreams.
Appreciate your review and comments.. ;) Art