Writing Prompt Entry
Opening Lines and Final Thoughts32 total reviews
Comment from sweetchickette
I should have read what this contest was about before I read this so that I would understand more, but it sounds good. The one thing I noticed off the bat is that "hates me brakes - I think you meant breaks".
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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I should have read what this contest was about before I read this so that I would understand more, but it sounds good. The one thing I noticed off the bat is that "hates me brakes - I think you meant breaks".
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Yes, it should be breaks. Thanks. I had fun with this one.
