What Once Was Heard
Rictameter Contest Prompt Entry30 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Exquisitely phrased and well conceived. A wonderful entry for the contest for which I am highly considering voting, though there are a quite a few strong contenders. The tone and tenor of this has grace and maturity that sets it apart.
Bravo!~
Best of luck in the contest.
I find no spags.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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Exquisitely phrased and well conceived. A wonderful entry for the contest for which I am highly considering voting, though there are a quite a few strong contenders. The tone and tenor of this has grace and maturity that sets it apart.
Bravo!~
Best of luck in the contest.
I find no spags.
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 20-Apr-2009
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Beautiful poetry about the echos in within the walls of an empty room full of memories. As always you touch the heart with your tender words and loss obviously felt.
God bless you! I almost messed up with my contest entry when i didn't use the SAME word as the first one to end my poem! Whew...I juste edited it!
Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Jj
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Beautiful poetry about the echos in within the walls of an empty room full of memories. As always you touch the heart with your tender words and loss obviously felt.
God bless you! I almost messed up with my contest entry when i didn't use the SAME word as the first one to end my poem! Whew...I juste edited it!
Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Jj
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from Amicus
I really like your rictameter poem, Diane. It's written in flawless form with a smooth flow and it evokes a somewhat bitter-sweet poignancy.
Well done. Good luck in your contest.
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I really like your rictameter poem, Diane. It's written in flawless form with a smooth flow and it evokes a somewhat bitter-sweet poignancy.
Well done. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from jlsavell
Mrs.KT, as always your work is excellent. This rictameter is wonderful as you truly encompass the first word echoes, a distant sound in the recesses of our mind's memories that we never want to let go or silence..well done..best wishes on the contest..jlsavell
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Mrs.KT, as always your work is excellent. This rictameter is wonderful as you truly encompass the first word echoes, a distant sound in the recesses of our mind's memories that we never want to let go or silence..well done..best wishes on the contest..jlsavell
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from ~Dovey
I liked the symmetry of this entire presentation. The picture of the door, while not directly reflecting the content of the poem, was the perfect choice given the symmetry of the rictameter style and the concept of echoes. A very enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
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I liked the symmetry of this entire presentation. The picture of the door, while not directly reflecting the content of the poem, was the perfect choice given the symmetry of the rictameter style and the concept of echoes. A very enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from tteach
Throughout these rooms where love once dwelled
This line says so much! It explains why there are only echoes remaining. I appreciate the explanation of the form. It seems to me that you fulfilled the requirement.
terry
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Throughout these rooms where love once dwelled
This line says so much! It explains why there are only echoes remaining. I appreciate the explanation of the form. It seems to me that you fulfilled the requirement.
terry
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
this poem is nicely written. each sentence is well structured and reads smoothly. i found no errors while reading. it was my pleasure. good luck in the contest.
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this poem is nicely written. each sentence is well structured and reads smoothly. i found no errors while reading. it was my pleasure. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent rictameter form - I counted to be sure! :-)
echoes of laughter in rooms where love once dwelled - what a wistful quality this poem has - it really moved me. Brooke
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Excellent rictameter form - I counted to be sure! :-)
echoes of laughter in rooms where love once dwelled - what a wistful quality this poem has - it really moved me. Brooke
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great job with the poetry and I love the line " Echoes of your laughter can still be heard today, throughout these rooms where love once dwelled." Great job with the poetry. Excellent.
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Great job with the poetry and I love the line " Echoes of your laughter can still be heard today, throughout these rooms where love once dwelled." Great job with the poetry. Excellent.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
Comment from Jnetgame
This is an excellent rictameter. It flows well and is full of emotion. I think this has a good chance in the contest. Good luck to you.------------
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This is an excellent rictameter. It flows well and is full of emotion. I think this has a good chance in the contest. Good luck to you.------------
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
