Comment from just2draw

Excellent

Another nice piece! Sorry, I've been away and might have missed some of your work. I missed it! This is a nice light romantic piece, very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

It is nice to see you!! Thank you :-) Brooke

Comment from jkhudson

Excellent

Hah! What a sweet, simple, straight-forward poem. In its simplicity it draws a smile from whoever reads it. Great job Brooke!~:O)Jules

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Jules, sometimes I'm in the mood for one that's light and fun, no deep meanings or social significance - glad you appreciate that! Thanks, Brooke :-)

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

A light, fun, and very enjoyable poem, Brooke. I wish I was standing in that sea of lemon yellow with winking brown eyes right now. Great poem.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Indy, thank you - I'd like to be standing there too! Brooke

Comment from skye

Excellent

I have a brown-eyed cousin named Susan, and this is her favorite flower....
Your poem is such a whimsical, uplifting creation, much like this beloved cousin.
Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Skye, thank you - I'm glad my little poem reminds you of a beloved cousin! brooke :-)

Comment from NightWriter

Excellent

"Sweet Brown-eyed Susan" is a beautifully written poem. There is good description throughout, such as the sea of lemon yellow, to perfect rhythm and rhyming. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Thank you for your warm response :-) Brooke

Comment from kcgene

Excellent

So good! Your use of words and rhyming is just masterful! The pic and the yellow font, it all flows so well. I love the way you did this. And it's a very cute poem as well.
great job!
~kc

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

kc, thank you - I appreciate your gracious response, Brooke

Comment from laurelp

Excellent

You do write beautiful poems. You not only have the soul of a poet, but the capabilities of putting all down on paper. This poem was lovely and, of course, without errors.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Thank you for such a warm response :-) Brooke

Comment from lkatka

Excellent

When I read the title on the listing page, it didn't even occur to me that this could be about the flower! You are so clever. This is a catchy and cute little poem.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Thank you - I appreciate your kind review. Brooke

Comment from Terror2s

Excellent

Well, your yellow and brown color scheme certainly evokes a nicer image than mine does. (I think you read my last silly one.) You captured a nice image of this pretty and relatively hardy flower. Terror

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Thank you - I appreciate your kind words :-) Brooke

Comment from debskatz

Exceptional

Hey brooke,

I just love it!! What a wonderful poem. Though the picture is fabulous, it's really not needed as your poem perfectly paints the scene. Lemon yellow sea & having the flower flirt with you. Brilliant!

Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem with us!

smiles,

deb

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009

Deb, thank you for this wonderfully generous review!!! Brooke :-D And good morning!!!