Sweet Brown-eyed Susan
whimsical quatrains96 total reviews
Comment from ersorenson
You have so many "All Time Best" poems that I'm impressed. I think it's because you write such nice poems all the time. This one is one of my favorites: I love flowers and there's nothing better than a field of them to walk in. Congratulations on your writing.
Eric
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009
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You have so many "All Time Best" poems that I'm impressed. I think it's because you write such nice poems all the time. This one is one of my favorites: I love flowers and there's nothing better than a field of them to walk in. Congratulations on your writing.
Eric
Comment Written 21-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009
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Thanks, Eric - I do appreciate all your kind reviews, Brooke
Comment from Kym Jade
Beautiful! We really enjoyed this lovely poem and the smile it brought to our faces. It's fun seeing everything as a truly living thing.
Love and blessings
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009
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Beautiful! We really enjoyed this lovely poem and the smile it brought to our faces. It's fun seeing everything as a truly living thing.
Love and blessings
Comment Written 20-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009
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Thank you - you are always so gracious :-) Brooke
Comment from fictionwriter
I love the flower poems and as always you described them in a way that I can picture it with out the picture. But I love the picture also. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2009
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I love the flower poems and as always you described them in a way that I can picture it with out the picture. But I love the picture also. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2009
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Again, thank you again and again!! Brooke
Comment from rmdelta
Brooke,
beautifully written poem, my friend. slowly, but surely I'm still trying to catch up. Don't think I'll ever succeed. I really enjoyed this little gem, quite clever and very witty.
Well done
Reggie
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Brooke,
beautifully written poem, my friend. slowly, but surely I'm still trying to catch up. Don't think I'll ever succeed. I really enjoyed this little gem, quite clever and very witty.
Well done
Reggie
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Reggie, thank you - take care of yourself before worrying about catching up!! :-) Brooke
Comment from Mike K2
In Maryland it is the black-eyed Susan that is the state flower. Just a bit of trivia, for our big horse racing event, we use daisies that have the centers darkened in as the flower is not yet in bloom.
I enjoyed this poem and there is noting like a field of them that denotes beauty more. I enjoyed this nicely written poem.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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In Maryland it is the black-eyed Susan that is the state flower. Just a bit of trivia, for our big horse racing event, we use daisies that have the centers darkened in as the flower is not yet in bloom.
I enjoyed this poem and there is noting like a field of them that denotes beauty more. I enjoyed this nicely written poem.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Mike, in researching my poem, I learned that! :-D And I always watch the Triple Crown on tv - since a kid, so I knew that too - I'm feeling all smart. LOLOLOL thank you! Brooke :-)
Comment from Freeflyer
What a delightful love story. It should be one sided because the flower should not have a the personality you have given it. Susan uses her beauty to seduce so you have made her human. Great job. I really liked this.
Freeflyer
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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What a delightful love story. It should be one sided because the flower should not have a the personality you have given it. Susan uses her beauty to seduce so you have made her human. Great job. I really liked this.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Freeflyer, thank you - I appreciate the kind review, Brooke :-)
Comment from Goinup
Hello adewpearl again.
I love your floral tributes in poetic form. Such lovely imagery personified in your words. I enjoyed this one.
Have a nice week.
Ian
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Hello adewpearl again.
I love your floral tributes in poetic form. Such lovely imagery personified in your words. I enjoyed this one.
Have a nice week.
Ian
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Thank you, Ian - I hope you have a lovely week too!! Brooke
Comment from zocalo
I absolutely loved this poem! It really brightens up my day. It flows so smoothly and paints such a pretty picture. It couldn't be any better. The artwork and font color were perfect as well. I'm new to poetry and I hope to write something nearly as good as this one day.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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I absolutely loved this poem! It really brightens up my day. It flows so smoothly and paints such a pretty picture. It couldn't be any better. The artwork and font color were perfect as well. I'm new to poetry and I hope to write something nearly as good as this one day.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2009
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Thank you so much!! I truly appreciate your generous response to this fanciful poem. Brooke :-D
Comment from Treesaw
Okay...I'm dizzy now. I think I just read another one of your poems and then this. Delightful! Utterly delightful! I really mean this. I loved both of them and the beat was smooth, the cadence--music in my mind's ear. if you haven't already, then you must compile these into one volume of beautiful poems. Illustrated, of course! :-) Please, keep writing!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2009
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Okay...I'm dizzy now. I think I just read another one of your poems and then this. Delightful! Utterly delightful! I really mean this. I loved both of them and the beat was smooth, the cadence--music in my mind's ear. if you haven't already, then you must compile these into one volume of beautiful poems. Illustrated, of course! :-) Please, keep writing!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2009
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Thank you so much - your encouragement is inspiring, believe me!! :-) Brooke
Comment from tammipratt
This poem has a lot of clarity in its structure and I was very impressed with the form and the rhyme. No spelling, grammar or punctuation errors that I could see.
Created some good imagery with just these few words.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2009
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This poem has a lot of clarity in its structure and I was very impressed with the form and the rhyme. No spelling, grammar or punctuation errors that I could see.
Created some good imagery with just these few words.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2009
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Sorry I've taken so long to reply - a bunch of old reviews got buried under a few days of new ones! Thank you so much :-) Brooke
