Triolets: Traditional and Modified
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Hearts in True Communion Meet"Poems employing this musical, repeating form
75 total reviews
Comment from Mike K2
I enjoyed this poem and glad that I didn't miss it. I was never a great communicator, but life can be interesting and it is through writing that I have learned so much about my self, ideas and ideals. The enjoyment has been in getting them out. Very well written. Mike
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2009
I enjoyed this poem and glad that I didn't miss it. I was never a great communicator, but life can be interesting and it is through writing that I have learned so much about my self, ideas and ideals. The enjoyment has been in getting them out. Very well written. Mike
Comment Written 22-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2009
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Mike, thank you for reviewing this work that is no longer promoted - that is thoughtful of you. Brooke
Comment from fictionwriter
I love this. It reminds me of the walls we build ourselves to protect us from others, and How love can tear those walls down and get to someones heart. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2009
I love this. It reminds me of the walls we build ourselves to protect us from others, and How love can tear those walls down and get to someones heart. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2009
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You are very perceptive - thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from Annmuma
This is top of the line in visual presentation, in premise and in structure. Your author's notes added much as well as I hadn't thought of it in terms of the power of love in the world. Nice way to begin day. Thanks. ann
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2009
This is top of the line in visual presentation, in premise and in structure. Your author's notes added much as well as I hadn't thought of it in terms of the power of love in the world. Nice way to begin day. Thanks. ann
Comment Written 18-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2009
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Ann, thank you - it really is so great to read your essays and reviews again :-) Brooke
Comment from Gramma Kathy
This is beautiful! What an inspiring poem - thank you!
I think this is the best example of a triolet I have seen. I so appreciate your lessons in the different forms of poetry.
Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
This is beautiful! What an inspiring poem - thank you!
I think this is the best example of a triolet I have seen. I so appreciate your lessons in the different forms of poetry.
Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
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Kathy, thank you for that wonderful comment! Brooke :-)
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke Thanks for the lovely poem of love. As you say any sort of love. Looking around and finding and putting out love. The artwork is most approppriate. Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
Hi Brooke Thanks for the lovely poem of love. As you say any sort of love. Looking around and finding and putting out love. The artwork is most approppriate. Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 17-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
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Gaye, thank you - I appreciate your gracious comments, Brooke
Comment from jkhudson
Angelheart has wonderful art! (No rhyme intended!lol) I have used her a couple of times. Your peom reminds me of the passage in the bible where it states no thing can keep us from the love of Jesus. Same thing with true love where communion of the heart takes place. Great job!~:O)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
Angelheart has wonderful art! (No rhyme intended!lol) I have used her a couple of times. Your peom reminds me of the passage in the bible where it states no thing can keep us from the love of Jesus. Same thing with true love where communion of the heart takes place. Great job!~:O)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
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Jules, thank you for your insightful and warm comments, Brooke
Comment from Kym Jade
Love will find a way. This is a wonderful poem which reaches into the readers heart and gives them something to aspire for.
Blessings
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
Love will find a way. This is a wonderful poem which reaches into the readers heart and gives them something to aspire for.
Blessings
Comment Written 16-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
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I truly appreciate your gracious response. Blessings to you, too. Brooke
Comment from unidian
Hey Brooke, just doodlin' around and came accross this little gem. Wonderful! Really hits the spot - if you know what I mean. See your still number one on the 'leader board' ... dunno where you get the time LOL Anyhoo, here's a six to show you deserve to be where you are. x Tom
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
Hey Brooke, just doodlin' around and came accross this little gem. Wonderful! Really hits the spot - if you know what I mean. See your still number one on the 'leader board' ... dunno where you get the time LOL Anyhoo, here's a six to show you deserve to be where you are. x Tom
Comment Written 16-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
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Tom, thank you!! I appreciate your warm and encouraging comments and your exceptionally generous rating!! :-) Brooke
Comment from marion
Hi adewpearl
I could fall in love with all triolets. Well written ones, that is! I don't know if I have already told you, but I think they make beautiful poetry. I like reading them. This one is no different, I enjoyed in immensely. So few words yet so touching. Marion.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2009
Hi adewpearl
I could fall in love with all triolets. Well written ones, that is! I don't know if I have already told you, but I think they make beautiful poetry. I like reading them. This one is no different, I enjoyed in immensely. So few words yet so touching. Marion.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2009
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Marion, thank you! You've made my night. Brooke :-)
Comment from babylonia
brooke,
i like the words as well. i always hope that with more caring there is less hate. sometimes i wonder. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2009
brooke,
i like the words as well. i always hope that with more caring there is less hate. sometimes i wonder. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 16-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2009
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Thank you, Barbara :-) Brooke
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brooke,
you are welcome.
love,
barbara