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Triolets: Traditional and Modified

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Hearts in True Communion Meet"
Poems employing this musical, repeating form

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Comment from Mike K2
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I enjoyed this poem and glad that I didn't miss it. I was never a great communicator, but life can be interesting and it is through writing that I have learned so much about my self, ideas and ideals. The enjoyment has been in getting them out. Very well written. Mike

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2009
    Mike, thank you for reviewing this work that is no longer promoted - that is thoughtful of you. Brooke
Comment from fictionwriter
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I love this. It reminds me of the walls we build ourselves to protect us from others, and How love can tear those walls down and get to someones heart. Great job.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2009
    You are very perceptive - thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from Annmuma
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This is top of the line in visual presentation, in premise and in structure. Your author's notes added much as well as I hadn't thought of it in terms of the power of love in the world. Nice way to begin day. Thanks. ann

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2009
    Ann, thank you - it really is so great to read your essays and reviews again :-) Brooke
Comment from Gramma Kathy
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This is beautiful! What an inspiring poem - thank you!

I think this is the best example of a triolet I have seen. I so appreciate your lessons in the different forms of poetry.

Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
    Kathy, thank you for that wonderful comment! Brooke :-)
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
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Hi Brooke Thanks for the lovely poem of love. As you say any sort of love. Looking around and finding and putting out love. The artwork is most approppriate. Cheers Gaye

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
    Gaye, thank you - I appreciate your gracious comments, Brooke
Comment from jkhudson
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Angelheart has wonderful art! (No rhyme intended!lol) I have used her a couple of times. Your peom reminds me of the passage in the bible where it states no thing can keep us from the love of Jesus. Same thing with true love where communion of the heart takes place. Great job!~:O)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
    Jules, thank you for your insightful and warm comments, Brooke
Comment from Kym Jade
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Love will find a way. This is a wonderful poem which reaches into the readers heart and gives them something to aspire for.

Blessings

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
    I truly appreciate your gracious response. Blessings to you, too. Brooke
Comment from unidian
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Hey Brooke, just doodlin' around and came accross this little gem. Wonderful! Really hits the spot - if you know what I mean. See your still number one on the 'leader board' ... dunno where you get the time LOL Anyhoo, here's a six to show you deserve to be where you are. x Tom

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2009
    Tom, thank you!! I appreciate your warm and encouraging comments and your exceptionally generous rating!! :-) Brooke
Comment from marion
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Hi adewpearl

I could fall in love with all triolets. Well written ones, that is! I don't know if I have already told you, but I think they make beautiful poetry. I like reading them. This one is no different, I enjoyed in immensely. So few words yet so touching. Marion.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2009
    Marion, thank you! You've made my night. Brooke :-)
Comment from babylonia
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brooke,
i like the words as well. i always hope that with more caring there is less hate. sometimes i wonder. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2009


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2009
    Thank you, Barbara :-) Brooke
reply by babylonia on 16-Apr-2009
    brooke,
    you are welcome.
    love,
    barbara