CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from MJMuraco
Your nonet poem is done very well. Your message is strong and it certainly follows the format you describe in your notes. I enjoyed it.
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Your nonet poem is done very well. Your message is strong and it certainly follows the format you describe in your notes. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from rmdelta
Sue, a well written poem, my friend. It was an absorbing look into the soul and brain. A great contest entry, I think you should do very nicely in the voting.
Reggie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2009
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Sue, a well written poem, my friend. It was an absorbing look into the soul and brain. A great contest entry, I think you should do very nicely in the voting.
Reggie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2009
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Thanks so much for your great compliments and review, Reggie! Regards, Sue
Comment from Journey woman
Very nice and the artwork complements the poem. I also liked the subject matter which is inspirational. The use of the word "seeds" to aid the source is clever.
Journey Woman
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Very nice and the artwork complements the poem. I also liked the subject matter which is inspirational. The use of the word "seeds" to aid the source is clever.
Journey Woman
Comment Written 08-Apr-2009
Comment from Winslow
Dear Sixteen,
This is a good Nonet poem, I like how you have to nuture the seeds of your strengths. I only have one little nit, I don't like the word bloom, it relates back to seed and seems that you have skipped a few steps. It would be easy to fix. It is great as it is but I think it could be even better. Just my thought.
Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear Sixteen,
This is a good Nonet poem, I like how you have to nuture the seeds of your strengths. I only have one little nit, I don't like the word bloom, it relates back to seed and seems that you have skipped a few steps. It would be easy to fix. It is great as it is but I think it could be even better. Just my thought.
Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from Rottie
Ah1 This is is the best so far1 I am reading them all and it was close till now. You are just awesome at this type of structure poems. Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Ah1 This is is the best so far1 I am reading them all and it was close till now. You are just awesome at this type of structure poems. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Rottie, thanks so much for your great compliments and review. Very much appreciated! Sue
Comment from Atlantalu
Excellent. I have to say more or the rating won't take so: I understood at least from my point of view.Who elses would it be? Anyway-Very Good Job! Atlantalu
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Excellent. I have to say more or the rating won't take so: I understood at least from my point of view.Who elses would it be? Anyway-Very Good Job! Atlantalu
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Ha! It is funny how we have to write reviews sometimes longer than the poem! :-)) Thanks so much for your great compliments. Sue
Comment from c_lucas
I have very little understanding of this form of poetry and I will never attempt it. This looks like it is in perfect form. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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I have very little understanding of this form of poetry and I will never attempt it. This looks like it is in perfect form. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from bard owl
Fear is a fraud perpetuated by the devil himself. This poem is outstanding in it's inspiration to find a lighted way away from fear. Excellent contest entry. Best of luck. Blessings always, Linda
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Fear is a fraud perpetuated by the devil himself. This poem is outstanding in it's inspiration to find a lighted way away from fear. Excellent contest entry. Best of luck. Blessings always, Linda
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
Comment from Soulester
Hello, Sixteezkid, You did an excellent job on your nonet poem. You did a good job developing the seed metaphor, and your use of enjambment keeps it flowing. I especially like "expose my fear as the fraud it is." Great job--and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Hello, Sixteezkid, You did an excellent job on your nonet poem. You did a good job developing the seed metaphor, and your use of enjambment keeps it flowing. I especially like "expose my fear as the fraud it is." Great job--and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2009
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Soulester, thanks so much for your comments on the enjambment. I do try not to make it choppy in these forms of poetry. Thank you for your compliments and very kind review. Sue
Comment from patwannabe
Sixteezkid, your nonet is heartfelt. I've been reading some pretty gruesome posts lately and I'm now depressed right along with the rest of you. However, there is a Light at the end of the tunnel. His name is Jesus. Take care, pat
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Sixteezkid, your nonet is heartfelt. I've been reading some pretty gruesome posts lately and I'm now depressed right along with the rest of you. However, there is a Light at the end of the tunnel. His name is Jesus. Take care, pat
Comment Written 07-Apr-2009
