Comment from Gaye Hemsley

Excellent

Hi Brooke Once again a very fitting poem for the season. If only we could all stop and think what we are doing. Your poem sends the message of love. All the best Gaye

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2009

Gaye, thank you - as always you are a gracious reviewer. Brooke :-)

Comment from Stephen C Winter (Vs

Excellent

Dear Brooke,

A happy palm Sunday to you, Your poem sums up the feeling of palm Sunday with elequance and style.
It is now more relevant than ever to remeber Jesus ride through jerusalem,with the recent events....a hope for peace.

Steve

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Steve, thank you - I always appreciate your kind comments, Brooke

Comment from Nescher Pyscher

Excellent

::Nodding::

I don't like the form, but you know that by now.

:0)

Very cool piece here. Clean, well-written and timely with a heavy truth. Good stuff, yo'!

:0)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Nescher, Nescher, Nescher - what am I going to do with you and these short forms? LOLOLOL Thank you so much!!! Brooke

Comment from busybee

Excellent

that poem was very short,but what a statement it made.
could not know the victory he'd bring. if they only knew. fantastic job

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

dottie, thank you so much for a gracious review, Brooke

Comment from Pen&Ink

Excellent

Hello Brooke,

I read your notes and couldn't agree more. As for the little poem, it was nice. In those few syllables you told the message my minister took 35 minutes to deliver. Way to go!

Ray

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Ray, those sermons really can go long, can't they? LOL Maybe I should start my own church by advertising poetic sermons that don't run more than a minute! LOL Thanks, Brooke

reply by Pen&Ink on 07-Apr-2009

If you build it , they will come!
Ray

Comment from womanwriter

Excellent

I could read your poetry all day long and NEVER get bored!

Funny that Palm Sunday is the favorite day of the year for both of us. I always feel like there is so much hope wrapped up in that day.

Thanks for sharing.

Sincerely,
Womanwriter
Christine

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Christine - exactly - it is a day of hope, one day when the people got it right and received Jesus with praise and joy! Thanks so much, Brooke

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

Another awesome poem about the greatest man on the earth. I love Easter and all that it represents. I love the poem and the picture is beautiful, well done.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Thanks so much! Brooke

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

My dear Brooke,
A beautiful concept and an equally beautiful poem. I found your notes to be almost as uplifting as the verse.
Regards and Happy Easter,
Reg

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Reg, happy Easter to you too! Thank you, Brooke :-)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A very well written tribute to one of Christianity's holy days. Very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Charlie, thank you so much! Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 07-Apr-2009

You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie

Comment from jmyron

Excellent

The victory of life over death is a hard act to follow. Well written, with a message that is a true slice of the pie that is the relation between God, Jesus, and us.

John

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2009

John, thank you so much for your thoughtful response, Brooke