A Full Morning
A Septolet78 total reviews
Comment from Annelisa
You think that's enough carbs to keep up the pace???
I told you you have mastered the septolet. It suits your writing. Well done!
Annelisa
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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You think that's enough carbs to keep up the pace???
I told you you have mastered the septolet. It suits your writing. Well done!
Annelisa
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Annelisa, thank you - I was in the mood to be funny. :-) Brooke
Comment from Arkine
Sounds like someone is having a rather unhealthy breakfest and then going to have a cardio test??? ~L~ I hope that they're only going to go work out and not see a doc. Interesting poem, wonderful picture to go with it. :)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Sounds like someone is having a rather unhealthy breakfest and then going to have a cardio test??? ~L~ I hope that they're only going to go work out and not see a doc. Interesting poem, wonderful picture to go with it. :)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Yep, a cardio test is what I was trying to imply in my little satire :-) Brooke
Comment from EllieKaye
Hi Brooke,
This one is fantastic. I still have a smile on my face. Great job.
The home fries sound really good about now.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Hi Brooke,
This one is fantastic. I still have a smile on my face. Great job.
The home fries sound really good about now.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Ellie - if I eat this late at night I get heart burn! :-) Thanks so much, Brooke
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I shouldn't eat this late, either. I better get ready for bed, so I don't! Good night!
Comment from Lady & Louis
ROFL okay, so are we super-confident or expecting to bomb out anyway and just don't care? (Boss's theory: build up the carbs for energy!) Grand use of the septolet here, Brooke, such a contrasting picture, love it!
Louise :DDDDD
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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ROFL okay, so are we super-confident or expecting to bomb out anyway and just don't care? (Boss's theory: build up the carbs for energy!) Grand use of the septolet here, Brooke, such a contrasting picture, love it!
Louise :DDDDD
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Louise, thank you - after the dogwood tree I figured funny was a good way to go for this next poem :-) Brooke
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And funny it is! My boss is no poetry fan but he laughed when I read it out!
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you read my poetry to your boss? LOL
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Yup - I read all sorts of stuff out to the boss, from letters to the paper (online) to stuff about F1 to stuff from FanStory! And he spends a fair bit of time sending me silly emails. Just saw a great one of a kitten keeping a dog from pinching its food - one quick claw to the nose, whack!
Comment from debskatz
hey brooke,
you're funny! what a wonderful way to get the message across that we all need to be eating better. except on Sunday. I reserve that day to eat a little better than I should! lol
thanks for sharing this timely message with us!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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hey brooke,
you're funny! what a wonderful way to get the message across that we all need to be eating better. except on Sunday. I reserve that day to eat a little better than I should! lol
thanks for sharing this timely message with us!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Deb, I didn't want everyone to think I'm all serious/saintly after the dogwood tree - figured I'd remind people I can laugh LOL Thanks so much, Brooke
Comment from Jnetgame
Cute poem, Brooke. It has a touch of humor that I like but is not overly silly. I have not written a septolet before, but this seems like a great one.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Cute poem, Brooke. It has a touch of humor that I like but is not overly silly. I have not written a septolet before, but this seems like a great one.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Thanks for your thoughtful review, Brooke :-)
Comment from jaeladarling
LOL! I love this - it's so totally me! Eat a bunch of junk, and then it's fitness time! I'm getting myself out of that habit, but it's oh so hard. Tomorrow morning will see if I can crawl out of bed for a workout.
Thanks for sharing this with us!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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LOL! I love this - it's so totally me! Eat a bunch of junk, and then it's fitness time! I'm getting myself out of that habit, but it's oh so hard. Tomorrow morning will see if I can crawl out of bed for a workout.
Thanks for sharing this with us!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Actually, treadmill test was implying a trip to the doctor for heart-problem testing, which makes it even worse than eating junk and then having to work out :-) Thanks so much for your most generous review and great comments :-) Brooke
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I know what it is. ;) I was comparing it to my workout woes. It's about the closest thing I have for comparison. :)
Comment from just2draw
Hahaha.. comedy poetry. I am amused! This is fun... One wonders how that treadmill test went.
Read cleanly, and had me snerking. Good work.
I'm hungry now...
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Hahaha.. comedy poetry. I am amused! This is fun... One wonders how that treadmill test went.
Read cleanly, and had me snerking. Good work.
I'm hungry now...
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Hmmm, hungry - perhaps you need to reread the second verse. LOL Thanks, Brooke :-)
