A Full Morning
A Septolet78 total reviews
Comment from sara-beth
You did it again,....created that great tension and irony between the two sections!....it's both light and serious, and people will definitely relate to it,.....it's so hard to eat right all the time, even when your heart is in trouble and cholesterol levels are skyrocketing!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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You did it again,....created that great tension and irony between the two sections!....it's both light and serious, and people will definitely relate to it,.....it's so hard to eat right all the time, even when your heart is in trouble and cholesterol levels are skyrocketing!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Sara-beth - thanks so much for your thoughtful review, Brooke
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
You have done well in this piece you made me feel hungry you have shown so well showing us that we can indulge but we have to pay with workout afterwards to remove the access well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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You have done well in this piece you made me feel hungry you have shown so well showing us that we can indulge but we have to pay with workout afterwards to remove the access well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Fuller, thanks for your thoughtful comments, Brooke
Comment from prodigal
Ah yes, the treadmil will always tell teh truth. I liked this one, Brooke. The first stanza is about indulgence and the last about paying for it. I am on a diet now, but got hungry yesterday and overate. :( Well written. - Sam
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Ah yes, the treadmil will always tell teh truth. I liked this one, Brooke. The first stanza is about indulgence and the last about paying for it. I am on a diet now, but got hungry yesterday and overate. :( Well written. - Sam
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Sam, thanks for your positive review. Brooke
Comment from Ms. Gray
A very cute poem and a wonderful way to start a Monday morning. I have my annual check up in April and I started to think about those issues yesterday. Nice poem. Oh, good choice of photo.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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A very cute poem and a wonderful way to start a Monday morning. I have my annual check up in April and I started to think about those issues yesterday. Nice poem. Oh, good choice of photo.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Yes, that check up makes many people think, but evidently not the poor sap in this poem! LOL Thanks, Brooke
Comment from Domino
Morning, Brooke.
'Syrup AND eggs' Yuck! She must be pregnant! LOL.
I'd skip the breakfast, then wouldn't have to worry about the treadmill. ;-). Fun and ironic write. Love, ray xx
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Morning, Brooke.
'Syrup AND eggs' Yuck! She must be pregnant! LOL.
I'd skip the breakfast, then wouldn't have to worry about the treadmill. ;-). Fun and ironic write. Love, ray xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Oh, you don't have The International House of Pancakes and Denny's in England, I take it. They, and many other restaurants, have breakfasts that include eggs plus waffles or eggs plus pancakes as part of a breakfast package that also includes potatoes and a choice of bacon/sausage/ham. It's enough food to clog the arteries of an entire village :-) Thanks, Ray. Brooke
Comment from nora arjuna
Hmm, that sounds delicious, Brooke. This is as sweet and fresh as morning itself. I bet you've written a number of this forms by now. :)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Hmm, that sounds delicious, Brooke. This is as sweet and fresh as morning itself. I bet you've written a number of this forms by now. :)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Nora, yes, I've written several septolets now - this was my first humorous/satiric one. Thanks, Brooke
Comment from geetika sethi
Pearl...this is just me..
I have done that..belive me before the tmt and hogged like crazy before getting an angiagraphy done..
it feels like there is no tomorrow..so why not take the chance and fulfill all desires today...now itself..
great way to put it up and share...
All the best ..
take care n a greta week ahead!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2009
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Pearl...this is just me..
I have done that..belive me before the tmt and hogged like crazy before getting an angiagraphy done..
it feels like there is no tomorrow..so why not take the chance and fulfill all desires today...now itself..
great way to put it up and share...
All the best ..
take care n a greta week ahead!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2009
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Hi, sorry this review got buried under new ones and it has taken a while to get to it. Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
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review my naano contest one please..as i am confused about it,,thanks
Comment from Fleedleflump
I've never been able to get my head round pouring syrup on meat and eggs :-) Give me a monster british fry-up any day! This made me smile, and expressed something we all know, all acknowledge, and all do little about. After all, if I'm going to enjoy life at all, can't I eat some things that I actually like? ;-)
Mike
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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I've never been able to get my head round pouring syrup on meat and eggs :-) Give me a monster british fry-up any day! This made me smile, and expressed something we all know, all acknowledge, and all do little about. After all, if I'm going to enjoy life at all, can't I eat some things that I actually like? ;-)
Mike
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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OK - I'll bite - what is a British fry up? Thanks, Mike, for another kind review! :-) Brooke
Comment from Charles Keith
Morning Brooke,
excellent sepolet. It conveys, to me, the busy life of a waitress, howevwer it could essily be a busy housewife also.
Maybe it was the pic that made me think of eating establishments.
Best Wishes for your day
Keith
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Morning Brooke,
excellent sepolet. It conveys, to me, the busy life of a waitress, howevwer it could essily be a busy housewife also.
Maybe it was the pic that made me think of eating establishments.
Best Wishes for your day
Keith
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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It's meant to convey the life of someone who eats a totally unhealthy meal on his or her way to a cardiac test appointment. LOL Ah well, perhaps I was a bit too subtle. :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from raimie
lol, this one cracks me up. a nice fun start to the day. i love the photo me and my husband are diner fans. love to scope one when vacationing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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lol, this one cracks me up. a nice fun start to the day. i love the photo me and my husband are diner fans. love to scope one when vacationing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Thanks so much - I was in the mood for a bit of satire/humor after the dogwood poem :-) Brooke
