The Legend of the Dogwood
reflective quatrain poem115 total reviews
Comment from LynnRadford
Powerful!
I'd not heard the legend prior to reading this poem,
although I had heard some of the bits about the dogwood blossoms.
You did a great job of putting it into a lyrical form that was perfect for the telling.
A great piece for the season!
Thanks for sharing, Brooke!
L
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Powerful!
I'd not heard the legend prior to reading this poem,
although I had heard some of the bits about the dogwood blossoms.
You did a great job of putting it into a lyrical form that was perfect for the telling.
A great piece for the season!
Thanks for sharing, Brooke!
L
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Lynn, thank you for your great comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from WRITER1
This is a true classic, I would put this in the local newspaper for Easter. I can't even express how great this is. This is your chance at history.
Donna
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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This is a true classic, I would put this in the local newspaper for Easter. I can't even express how great this is. This is your chance at history.
Donna
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Donna, thank you so much :-) I truly appreciate your enthusiastic response Brooke
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Hi Brooke
Don't just pass if off as just a good poem. It is a great piece.
Donna
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Well, you are just my new favorite person :-) You and the person who pumped it up 10 cents! It's a tie!! LOL
Comment from Rottie
Just a perfectly written piece of Easter Poetry. I never liked the Dogwood tree because of it's fluffy seeds, They coat everything. But, that would Jesus' love would it not? Coating everything like the Dogwood seed. Beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Just a perfectly written piece of Easter Poetry. I never liked the Dogwood tree because of it's fluffy seeds, They coat everything. But, that would Jesus' love would it not? Coating everything like the Dogwood seed. Beautiful poem!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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The dogwood has always been my absolute favorite - I'm so glad you like the poem. Thank you!! Brooke
Comment from mstad55
A fantastic poem, and an education too. I have always like the dogwood tree, just because it's a beautiful looking tree. I never heard the legend of it until now. How coool is that. And coming at an appropriate time in the season too. I'm sure this will, or should make it to the all time best list. Have a great day. Mike
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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A fantastic poem, and an education too. I have always like the dogwood tree, just because it's a beautiful looking tree. I never heard the legend of it until now. How coool is that. And coming at an appropriate time in the season too. I'm sure this will, or should make it to the all time best list. Have a great day. Mike
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Mike, thank you for your lovely comments - it's been my favorite tree since I was a wee little one and it grew in my yard. :-) Your generous rating is most kind and appreciated!!! Brooke
Comment from Nicnac
Beautiful, Brooke.
This poem flows so smoothly.
No matter how many times or different forms of writing that I hear this story told, it never gets old. This is a wonderful expression of the ageless legend of the dogwood.
I LOVE how your poem ends with words of endless hope.
I have no suggestions. Simply beautiful.
Nic
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Beautiful, Brooke.
This poem flows so smoothly.
No matter how many times or different forms of writing that I hear this story told, it never gets old. This is a wonderful expression of the ageless legend of the dogwood.
I LOVE how your poem ends with words of endless hope.
I have no suggestions. Simply beautiful.
Nic
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Nic, thank you - I was pleased with the way this turned out after about 50 drafts! LOL Brooke
Comment from EllieKaye
Hi Brooke,
Wow, a powerful poem! You did a fantastic job.
Thank you yet again for the author notes. I can't quite narrow down my favorite stanza, but this one, at the end wraps the poem together so well:
And still their cross-shaped blossoms bloom,
reminding us each May,
compassion triumphs over hate,
and hope outlives dismay
: ) Ellie
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Hi Brooke,
Wow, a powerful poem! You did a fantastic job.
Thank you yet again for the author notes. I can't quite narrow down my favorite stanza, but this one, at the end wraps the poem together so well:
And still their cross-shaped blossoms bloom,
reminding us each May,
compassion triumphs over hate,
and hope outlives dismay
: ) Ellie
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Ellie, I really appreciate your thoughtful response, Brooke
Comment from patwannabe
Oh, my gosh, Brooke, this is absolutely the finest thing I have ever read. You will never top this and neither will anyone else. Not only is the subject the best, but your rhyme is beyond perfect. What more can I say? pat
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Oh, my gosh, Brooke, this is absolutely the finest thing I have ever read. You will never top this and neither will anyone else. Not only is the subject the best, but your rhyme is beyond perfect. What more can I say? pat
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Pat, thank you and thank you some more!!! What can I say that is sufficient thanks for that much enthusiasm, not to mention the generous rating :-) Brooke
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
I had read of the legend of the dogwood. I have never heard it as well expressed as you have done it here. The meter and rhyme were superb. Your poems have such a nice flow and are so easy to read. This one ends with a nice message.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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I had read of the legend of the dogwood. I have never heard it as well expressed as you have done it here. The meter and rhyme were superb. Your poems have such a nice flow and are so easy to read. This one ends with a nice message.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much for your gracious review, Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Once more I come across a masterpiece of words. I loved this poem on the dogwood tree. The grace and flow suited the wonderful story you told. The last verse meant alot:
And still their cross-shaped blossoms bloom,
reminding us each May,
compassion triumphs over hate,
and hope outlives dismay.
Well written, Brooke. luv jada
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Once more I come across a masterpiece of words. I loved this poem on the dogwood tree. The grace and flow suited the wonderful story you told. The last verse meant alot:
And still their cross-shaped blossoms bloom,
reminding us each May,
compassion triumphs over hate,
and hope outlives dismay.
Well written, Brooke. luv jada
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Jada, thank you - I truly appreciate your lovely comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Mrs. KT
Simply exquisite, Brooke. You have encapsulated the Legend of the Dogwood extremely well even without mentionin the underside of it petals and the crown of thorns at its center. My husband and I planted two dogwoods in our yard twenty years ago, and when they bloom, their beauty is breathtaking to behold. A beautiful rendering. diane
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Simply exquisite, Brooke. You have encapsulated the Legend of the Dogwood extremely well even without mentionin the underside of it petals and the crown of thorns at its center. My husband and I planted two dogwoods in our yard twenty years ago, and when they bloom, their beauty is breathtaking to behold. A beautiful rendering. diane
Comment Written 29-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much, Diane. Are your dogwoods white? My absolute favorite is when people have both white and pink trees and they intertwine. Valley Forge National Park has white and pinks growing next to each other, and it blows me away. :-) Thanks so much for this most generous review, Brooke
