Comment from Cranial Thinker

Excellent

This is strange it confused me, a big blowout at the hospital and now they get you an apartment to be by your mom so you can help her if she should need it.Bell's went off in my head when they said senior center,as its always some body watching the goings and comings in places like that,so it lead me to think it was a blind set up for you.This is so good,please send me more.Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009

Yes, it was definitely a set up. More to come! Thanks for the high rating.

reply by Cranial Thinker on 27-Mar-2009

You are very welcomed,Smurphgirl.Cranial Thinker

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Sometimes family members do feel they no what is best and try to take over although there is usually a motive to it you have done well an enjoyable piece easy to follow and understand no spag well done regards Fuller

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009

Thank you. Yes, sadly there was an ulterior motive. I ap preciate your high rating and kind review.

Comment from Deejharrington

Excellent

A very good chapter! It brings up some interesting questions that I'm sure will be answered in upcoming chapters. Aren't families wonderful? Just rush right in and make decisions. So true in real life. Good writing.

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 Comment Written 27-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009

Thanks for the kind review. You comment "aren't families wonderful" made me laugh. I sinceely appreciate your kind review and high rating.