Masters of the Universe
not exactly a septolet78 total reviews
Comment from ersorenson
I really do like this one. The mighty dinosaur's now provide fuel for our monster trucks that waste the fuel provided. Pretty interesting thought, that. This is a fun poem, with a serious message, whether done on purpose of not. I like it.
Eric
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2009
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I really do like this one. The mighty dinosaur's now provide fuel for our monster trucks that waste the fuel provided. Pretty interesting thought, that. This is a fun poem, with a serious message, whether done on purpose of not. I like it.
Eric
Comment Written 03-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2009
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Eric, thanks for digging back into my portfolio to read this!! Brooke
Comment from perunest
Foreboding and forbidding - words
that most of us don't heed. I have to admit,
I try not to think of the ultimate end
to fossil fuels and what it will mean
to life as we know it. Of course, I expect
it won't happen in my lifetime, or my children's,
or my grandchildren's . . . Here come those rose-
colored glasses again . . . Great poem! Carolyn
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Foreboding and forbidding - words
that most of us don't heed. I have to admit,
I try not to think of the ultimate end
to fossil fuels and what it will mean
to life as we know it. Of course, I expect
it won't happen in my lifetime, or my children's,
or my grandchildren's . . . Here come those rose-
colored glasses again . . . Great poem! Carolyn
Comment Written 31-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009
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Carolyn, thank you so much - yes, we all hope it will be far enough away that at least we'll miss the doom. :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke Your words speak the truth, strange you should put these words down, I remember some years ago saying to a child in my life as we went to cross the road 'Imagine what it would have been like in pre-historic times. I would have said watch out for the Dinosaurs instead of the cars buses etc. Are you going to turn the lights off today? Our time is 8.30 tonight the 28th April Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2009
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Hi Brooke Your words speak the truth, strange you should put these words down, I remember some years ago saying to a child in my life as we went to cross the road 'Imagine what it would have been like in pre-historic times. I would have said watch out for the Dinosaurs instead of the cars buses etc. Are you going to turn the lights off today? Our time is 8.30 tonight the 28th April Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2009
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Gaye, thanks so much for your delightful comments, Brooke
Comment from Alexander E Poet
a little bit cryptic, but poetically powerful piece of work, very well done Good insights, and poetic flow, very enjoyable, There were no errors. No typos and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next One ,Alexander QQ...
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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a little bit cryptic, but poetically powerful piece of work, very well done Good insights, and poetic flow, very enjoyable, There were no errors. No typos and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next One ,Alexander QQ...
Comment Written 26-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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thank you, Alexander. Brooke
Comment from Sixteezkid
I'm going into the confessional booth with you here: I own a Hummer.
Ahhhh! Don't hate me! LOL!!!!
I'm just a little ole lady tooling 'bout town! To be honest, when I moved back up here to my hometown, I had not seen road rage as bad as this in 30 years. Tailgating, horn blowing, anger....I thought, "I'll show 'em". So, I went out and got my Hummer. They don't even mess with me! LOL!!
Oh yeah, your poem! Ha! Whatever the form is, I loved it!
Sue
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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I'm going into the confessional booth with you here: I own a Hummer.
Ahhhh! Don't hate me! LOL!!!!
I'm just a little ole lady tooling 'bout town! To be honest, when I moved back up here to my hometown, I had not seen road rage as bad as this in 30 years. Tailgating, horn blowing, anger....I thought, "I'll show 'em". So, I went out and got my Hummer. They don't even mess with me! LOL!!
Oh yeah, your poem! Ha! Whatever the form is, I loved it!
Sue
Comment Written 26-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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Sue Sue Sue - this is disappointment all over my face!!! Good for you that you can afford one! LOL I'm saving up money to buy my Honda an oil change. Thanks for your confessional comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Well I'll tell you what gal, them trucks look more exciting than a Dodge Dart. It's the coming down that is not too nice from the looks of things in this here poem.
Dave
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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Well I'll tell you what gal, them trucks look more exciting than a Dodge Dart. It's the coming down that is not too nice from the looks of things in this here poem.
Dave
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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Dave, you're incorrigible LOL Thanks, Brooke
Comment from redrider6612
This was good, even if it didn't follow the intended form. I enjoyed the way you contrasted the T-rex ruling the earth and man ruling the earth. I also liked the alliteration in the first stanza. Nice job
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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This was good, even if it didn't follow the intended form. I enjoyed the way you contrasted the T-rex ruling the earth and man ruling the earth. I also liked the alliteration in the first stanza. Nice job
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Thank you for another gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Lokman
There's an interesting correlation nonetheless, since fossil fuels come from the plant matter from the time of the dinosaurs. What are we leaving for our children? One of the amazing things about Brazil is they began using biofuels in the 1970's, and now most cars here can use both gasoline and biofuel in a mixture or just biofuel if you prefer. And many of those cars are made by the Big Three of the US believe it or not! may not be a septolet, lol, but it gets you thinking.
Shea
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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There's an interesting correlation nonetheless, since fossil fuels come from the plant matter from the time of the dinosaurs. What are we leaving for our children? One of the amazing things about Brazil is they began using biofuels in the 1970's, and now most cars here can use both gasoline and biofuel in a mixture or just biofuel if you prefer. And many of those cars are made by the Big Three of the US believe it or not! may not be a septolet, lol, but it gets you thinking.
Shea
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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I intended an even more direct correlation - with fossil fuel also coming from the remains of the dinosaurs themselves. Thank you, Shea, for your most thoughtful comments - I did not know about Brazil. Brooke
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
well no matter what it is, it holds an important message! well done; good thought; no corrections; my grandsons will love this artwork!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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well no matter what it is, it holds an important message! well done; good thought; no corrections; my grandsons will love this artwork!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your encouraging review, Brooke
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
To be honest, Brooke, I'd rather not think about the rest! I find myself grateful that I shall be long gone and so not witness this green planet's demise at the hands of man. Maybe the tyrannosaurus could do us a favour if he came back and did a little 'housekeeping' LOL. Great poem
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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To be honest, Brooke, I'd rather not think about the rest! I find myself grateful that I shall be long gone and so not witness this green planet's demise at the hands of man. Maybe the tyrannosaurus could do us a favour if he came back and did a little 'housekeeping' LOL. Great poem
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Kat, I love your idea!! Thanks, Brooke
