Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

Oh, there are no mundane moments with a newborn bundle of joy! :)
This is lovely. Your words are full of love and admiration in little Lexi. Such a pure and joyful love.

I have no suggestions. Nice presentation. This is so sweet.
Nic

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2009

thanks, again, Nic. love, jan

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Hello there poet friend.
What an adorable poem and photo pic as well. They are so precious and one day she will cherrish this poem. Good work, Loyd

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks, Loyd. love, jan

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 18-Mar-2009

A good Wednesday morning to you poet friend!
Jan, you are so very welcome!
Have a wonderful day, Loyd

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

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Working in daycare we talked about poop a lot. We decided it was probably one of the only jobs where it is really acceptable. Although we were always hoping the kids would wait for us to leave to poop it can be something to get excited about especially in your situation. As Lexi and you both grow you will find even more unique ways to sooth her

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

LOL. love, jan

Comment from mtngalofnc

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Hi Jan,
Your so right. There is never a dull moment with a little one in the house. Those moments such as dancing are such sweet memories and I hope Lexi is soon feeling better. You express these times with Lexi nicely in your poetry. Interesting with a smooth flow. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks, mtngalofnc. love, jan

Comment from joan marie

Excellent

I have heard it is an exciting time when they begin to 'poop'. I loved the first verse. Made me smile and the part about not stepping on toes was wonderful. joan marie

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks, joan marie. she'll have to worry about the toes when she gets older. LOL. love, jan

Comment from rmdelta

Excellent

Thanks for another well written story of your lovely grandchild, my friend. I always enjoy reading of your experiences with her

Reggie

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks, Reggie. love, jan

Comment from earthlybeing

Excellent

Oh I am so sorry she is still having trouble. I know about the dancing and when they like one thing it is that you have to do. Anything to calm and make them feel better. Great write. Thanks, Jeanette

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks, Jeanette. love, jan

Comment from VICTIMEYES

Excellent

i really liked two of these very much but the one the most was the last one ...

every day with you

is like dreaming while awake

best is still to come

i liked very much "the best is yet to come"

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks, ES. love, jan

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

jan,
yes, poops are worth celebrating. LOL they do eliminate the garbage from our bodies. wish we could do the same with our minds at times. this is beautiful. easy to read and follow. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. i waltzed with my daughter as well.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2009

I did with Cindy, too. thanks, barbara. love, jan

reply by babylonia on 14-Mar-2009

there is nothing like it. :P

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Yes, it is amazing how poetical the mundane can become with your pen. Your last poem is my favorite with its simile. I enjoyed the picture and think it is the perfect match for your theme.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2009

thanks, Joan E. I was dancing with Lexi and dictating the poem to my husband. It was great fun. love, jan