Comment from Mischief's Momma

Excellent

I am continuing my rummage at the depths of my inbox, and am so sorry I missed this one before, it is delightful.

I grew up with fairy tales, and as a British Brownie Guide I had to learn quite a bit of the little people lore.

I was patrol leader of the elfs and then the gnomes and we had our own little song we had to sing as a verse of the Brownie guide song. Brownies, of course, are from that kingdom too.

Sharon

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2009

You sure are being conscientious - thanks ever so much!! Brooke I used to be an American Brownie :-)

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

I've missed your fairy poems! :)
What fun.
I wont tell -- if you'll allow me to take that vacation with you. This sounds like a fascinating trip.

Your words have created a fun and exciting land of fairydom. Bravo. (I like that there are daisies there.) haha
Nic

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2009

Nic, well, of course there are daisies!! :-) Thanks, Brooke

Comment from jack silver

Excellent

this one had a pretty good rhyme to it that helped to flow along to a very nice finishing line. i enjoyed the read and look forward to getting my hands onto some more.

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jack

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2009

Jack, you're just a sweetheart!! You're really just 23? That's 3 years younger than my baby :-) Brooke

reply by jack silver on 20-Mar-2009

yep i am just 23. i turned it just a few months back.

Comment from glacierbabe

Excellent

This is delightful. I found no errors that needed correction. I love the rythm and the rhyme but most of all I loved the story. It is amazing where we can go if we let our imaginations take us. This was really wonderful. Cheryl :)

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

Cheryl, I had a fun time with this one - thank you!! Brooke

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

Just remember to pack me in your suitcase. This is a great poem. I like the tone and the flow and the rhyming sequence. The picture also goes great.
Barbara

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009

Hey, the more the merrier - thanks, Brooke

Comment from Freeflyer

Excellent

This was a delightful fantasy. Wouldn't it be nice if we could all disappear into this wonderland. I wish you good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

thanks so much - I lost but still had fun writing it! :-) Brooke

Comment from Brandenpaul

Excellent

To possess a key to a magical fairy land, how great would that be. where you could go and escape whenever you needed or wanted to. I thought this was cleverly written and easy to follow and read. I like poetry that entertains and just that sometimes. great job.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

Thanks so much for your great review, Brooke :-)

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

What a great little fantasy poem. I like the fact that your imagination had to kick in gear to find the key to the forbidden land. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

Thanks ever so much, Brooke

Comment from Paradox Tremors

Excellent

It's a very nice place to visit to get away from the troubles of the world and all. A great write my friend. Enjoyed it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

Thank you for your most kind comments, brooke :-)

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Excellent

This is very wistful and nice.
Beautiful fantasy poem that paints a nice and alluring picture of the world of fairies and the like. Good luck in the contest. kudos

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2009

Perp, thank you for your lovely, kind comments and encouragement, Brooke :-)