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A Leaf on the Wind

Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Walking on Eggshells"
Autobiography of abuse

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Comment from MJMuraco
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Your chapter is full of emotion and had a lot of hidden reasons why you are so angry and fly off of the handle so easily. One, is the abuse that you suffered as a child is eating at you and two, you mention that Richard never says I love you. I try to understand your pain and think that you may need to talk to someone professional to scream out your anger. You are a good wife and mother but need to deal with these deep issues which hurt you so much. Thank you for sharing with us. I gave you five stars for doing a great job of expressing yourself and for creating the scene so well.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2009


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2009
    Thank you for your kind review. It was difficult to describe being caught between remaining silent and getting angry. Difficult time in my life, clearly I needed guidence but not yet ready to search for it.
Comment from patwannabe
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Again, a 5. Wonderful. You certainly have a way of expressing rage as it really is. You make it very, very real. I'm lovin it. Next? patwannabe

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 Comment Written 09-Mar-2009


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2009
    You made me laugh! Yes, I definately have a way of describing anger and rage...lots of practice. Thank you for your kind review. I really appreciate it.